Fic: Dizzy Infinite (Discworld: Adora Belle Dearheart/Moist von Lipwig; T)

Feb 10, 2011 03:49

Title: Dizzy Infinite
Fandom: Discworld
Rating: T
Character(s)/Pairing(s): Adora Belle Dearheart/Moist von Lipwig
Word Count: ~300
Notes: I've never written in this fandom before, and this is un-beta'd, so please don't shoot me if it sucks? Written for thefannishwaldo's Valentine's story tree, prompt word "love" (the last word of the previous comment-fic must be ( Read more... )

fanfiction: !2011, fandom: discworld, fanfiction: discworld

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cincoflex February 10 2011, 12:07:18 UTC
hee, Moist is so besotted! I have always loved how despite all his confidence and cons, he's never been able to get the upper hand with Spike.

One puzzle though--you describe her eyes as 'alight' and by that you mean lit up, right, not landing on something?

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trialia February 10 2011, 12:11:39 UTC
Sorry, love, that's a very British usage of me. I always forget that it's that until it's pointed out by someone who isn't from around here. *g* Fortunately, I'm not out-of-fandom with it here. :)

*grins at the first paragraph* Oh, I know. I love those two, and especially her. Spike - as per my last post - is probably my favourite Discworld character of all (closely followed by Susan, Carrot and Angua, but not too closely :)).

Also, yay feedback! Thank you! :D Does it make me a bad person to keep checking if all these birthday emails coming in contain any feedback? *hides*

ETA 2: FWIW, it's rather an old-fashioned usage, too, but they are meant to be vaguely analogous to Victorian England, so I guess it still goes. *g*

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weird_fin February 10 2011, 15:04:59 UTC
Ooh you wrote for the Valentine's tree. Nicely done.

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trialia February 10 2011, 15:06:06 UTC
*grin* Thanks.

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