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Dec 20, 2009 03:28

Title: Big in Japan
Pairing: Akame
Rating: PG-13
Word count: 4 702
Disclaimer: No money has or will be made from the production of the following text. Apart from quotes, all situations and dialogues within the story are purely fictional.
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unrequitedangst December 20 2009, 02:39:00 UTC

I THINK I ALREADY TOLD YOU EVERYTHING I HAVE TO SAY ABOUT THIS FIC, BUT: ♥ ♥ ♥

tretton December 20 2009, 11:52:12 UTC

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razberrycreme December 20 2009, 02:42:04 UTC

T_T This is so beautiful. As soon as I started reading it I had a pit of feeling in my stomach and I knew it was going to be so heartbreaking (and it was) but so beautiful at the same time. And the last scene kills my heart. :( Thank you for writing this.

tretton December 20 2009, 11:58:35 UTC

Thank you. And sorry about aldkjfg the angst in yuletide.

puffie_hanchan December 20 2009, 04:02:07 UTC

♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
I really do love this :)

tretton December 20 2009, 11:59:27 UTC

alkdjfngakjdnfg Thank you! I'm very glad.

bellemainec December 20 2009, 06:10:08 UTC

fantastic, fabulous, wonderful and gorgeous. The focus on the moments that we know about and the way you placed them alongside the ones you created was lovely, it flowed really well. *hugs Kame* Kame Kame Kame...he is such a lovely boy who thinks he needs to hide his feelings under his shell. Maybe he does, I am sure he has been hurt, but he also needs to be willing to try again. Jin is complicated and obvious, immature and knowing in this...I liked the aspects of his character that we see, especially though Kame's eyes. *cuddles JIn* The last scene clinched it for me, and gives me hope that somehow they will find a common space.

tretton December 20 2009, 12:35:19 UTC

Thank you. aldfnjgakj I'm glad you thought it worked.

oncloud999 December 20 2009, 07:17:26 UTC

♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ i love your fics so much! i'm so glad you've written a new one. they always feel so raw and realistic, and they always make my heart break a little. thank you so much for writing.

tretton December 20 2009, 12:46:34 UTC

alkdjfngakjdgad Thank you so much, it's very encouraging to hear someone say they're glad I'm writing despite the flood of angst, sobbing. No, but Thank you, I'm touched you feel that way. <3