Fic: Falling is Like This, part 4 (don't have a heart attack...seriously)
Don't keel over from shock. This isn't an April Fool's joke that's five months too early. The thing is, I've been thinking about this story for ages now, and I hate not finishing things, and fewthistle's been more than a little pushy in a subtle and refined sort of way (and rightfully so!), and I was finally inspired this weekend to pick this up again (
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That has to be one of the most complimentary complaints that I've ever gotten *lol*. You really are too funny ;)
As for the story, I had a feeling that having something else, something that is actually important, might push you to do something completely unimportant, and I was right. Not that I am complaining about it, mind you. Merely commenting *bg*.
Abruptly alone with the woman she’d been dreaming about for weeks, Kelly stared at Serena, holding her gaze as if she were an anchor. She was afraid to turn her head, afraid to look away, for fear that Serena would disappear like a mirage or, worse yet, that, unmoored, she herself would drift farther out to sea ( ... )
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I am sorry that this part was so depressing--which is kind of why it's taken me two years to write--but it was a conversation they needed to have. I'm trying to figure out where to go from here and whether the sex scene(!) I've already written is entirely appropriate (maybe I'll send it your way...not safe for work reading, though *g*) for where I seem to be going with the story. Ah well. Thanksgiving break should be a good time to work on these things. Okay. Off to bed. I have a friend in town and my talk's tomorrow (today...)--ack!
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