You really can't count?

May 03, 2009 00:51

Title: ‘You Really Can’t Count ( Read more... )

fic, thestorymaker, challenge, much/allan 2009

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rochvelleth May 3 2009, 12:23:52 UTC
I love how you'd captured Allan's thought processes in this! Just how I imagine him, thinking about money first :) Very nicely done!

And I've been thinking about them going into business together too! It's obviously what they should do when all the fighting is over!

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thestorymaker May 3 2009, 17:24:23 UTC
I know, I like the idea of these two sticking together when the fight is over, I think they'd make a comical team!

Knowing Allan and his love of money I guess I was inspired that he'd know how to count every penny!

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robinfanatic May 3 2009, 13:57:13 UTC
A lovely missing bonding scene between Much & Allan. Yep, this is just the way it would have played out. Thanks for sharing! *hugs*

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thestorymaker May 3 2009, 17:25:28 UTC
thnx for reading darl xx I do like Much/Allan bonding.

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ironmaidenlove May 3 2009, 14:44:35 UTC
This is really great.
"They relied on each other in a way he’d not seen very often, as if neither of them could operate without the other."
I love this line. So sweet!

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thestorymaker May 3 2009, 17:28:59 UTC
Thanks very much, yup I cannot think of Much & Rob apart, I miss a lot of their interaction this season.

xx

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shaman_whore May 7 2009, 01:00:27 UTC
ooh, very good! like the others said, it was very appropriate that allan thinks about money first! when i first started reading i was dubious that allan would be able to count either as i wouldn't have thought he'd have had much of an education, but it makes sense that he'd want to know how much money he had at all times!
Lovely little scene you've got there, well done :)

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