Intercomm fic: Eye Line

[channiegurl]

Title: Eye Line,
Author: Channiegurl
Word Count: 366
Rating:PG
Characters/Pairings: Much
Spoilers/Warnings: season 3, mentions of character death
Summary: Part of three fics written to show three points of veiw after the end of (a slightly AU) season 3.
Disclaimer: I do not own Robin Hood.

Comments

[shaman_whore]

Oh wow, a lovely little fic! I love Guy's devotion in watching over Allan, and I also like that you didn't really go into the reasons for that, I think it's better that way.
Very, very good.

(although you're missing a 'told': He’d stirred, slightly, when they’d him that they were burying Robin)

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[robinfanatic]

How did I miss this getting posted?! It's so painful to think of Much with no Robin... I like how you tied his pain to watching Guy taking care of Allan, and those last lines He was prepared to leave, had even gathered his things together, just like he had once before, but this time it had been the sight of Guy, immobile and calm, had made him stop.

He needed that eye line, to keep a grip on the world.

Very powerful.

FYI... you're missing a word or two in there:
and had remained sat beside him
when they’d him that they