Comments | treatmuchright: My attempt at season 4

lady_lilletia in treatmuchright

My attempt at season 4

Aug 21, 2009 23:29

Footnotes, character notes, general thoughts and bibliography available at my journal.
Longer synopsis of ep13 available at my journal; full ep13 plot available on pm.
Please feel free to comment with your thoughts.

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( Read my season 4. Warning: natural series 3 spoilers )

season 4 competition, lady_lilletia

Comments 9

shaman_whore August 22 2009, 22:01:51 UTC

It's really weird reading this.. because on the one hand I know how hard I worked on mine and I want it to win but this one's so cool! I'm writing this and I've only got up to episode five so far... but four was so damn cool!!! And I love Much in Nottingham being the new Nightwatchman!
Ok, off to read more.

Oooohhhh! Its so good! Has had me squealing excitedly all through, just as if I was reading about/anticipating a 'real' series! I love it. The thing between Murdach and Longchamp is really good, and I loved Much's time in Nottingham, especially the idea of him being sheriff! Also interesting how we had a few similar ideas.. I won't say what in case you haven't read mine yet, but they're there, just done in different ways. Reading this also made me feel a bit of a fool for forgetting to give Locksley a new Lord, d'oh!
Excellent work :) Big well done!

rochvelleth August 24 2009, 16:45:25 UTC

I'm going to do this in two halves like I did with Shaman Whore, because it's a lot to read in one go! First, episode-by-episode comments ( ... )

rochvelleth August 24 2009, 16:49:56 UTC

P.S. Oh, Peak Castle is Peveril! I've been there, it's a great castle :) You have to park at the bottom and then walk right up to the top up this long winding path. You're stirring lovely childhood memories in me now :D

lady_lilletia August 26 2009, 10:01:52 UTC

I got really excited when Peak (Peveril) Castle and the forest came up in my research.
I have plenty of childhood memories from the area myself - the Peak Forest itself sometimes feels like my childhood playground.

rochvelleth August 26 2009, 12:40:35 UTC

continued...

Ep 8: Yay, Eleanor! I like the idea that the people are turning to Prince John - it's very sad and a nice twist.

Ep 9: I already love Fred! Great character. And Longchamp is reminding me a little bit of Thornton, what with killing one of his own men.

Ep 10: I like Murdach. And the mapmaking idea is brilliant. Ooh, Marian's ring! I hope that turns up again, nice plot point.

Ep 11: This is getting pleasantly tense and exciting. Elsie really is lovely :)

Ep 12: I love the stuff between Longchamp and Murdach - it's nice having the gang caught between two conflicting powers. Oh no, Elsie! Yay, the action's really hotting up!

I'll stop there, since I haven't read the full ep 13 synopsis (not sure if I want to or not - will have to think about that!). But I really enjoyed this, it was very exciting and full of great ideas. Well done! :D

grey_mills August 26 2009, 21:12:04 UTC

This is a very interesting take on what Season Four would be like. I'm very glad to see that not only is Archer a leader figure in the group, but Much has a large part to play as well. I'm impressed with how you've managed to keep the episodes and series as a whole from becoming repetitive or losing the 'Robin Hood' feel ( ... )