Series Four, Shaman_Whore Style!afroharoldAugust 23 2009, 15:35:23 UTC
Loved it! I like that it ended with questions still unanswered. I liked Will and Djaq coming back, but didn't like John being killed, and not in battle either, I always imagine John going out with swords and sticks whirling round his head! I think you should submit this to the BBC right away!
Re: Series Four, Shaman_Whore Style!shaman_whoreAugust 23 2009, 18:44:52 UTC
Thank you! I know, terribly naughty of me, but I thought it'd add shock value for John to die somewhere other than a battle, because that probably is how everyone would expect him to go out! Thank you very much for commenting :) xxx
Well, I have half a plan comment :) I got up to the end of episode seven and then decided I was tired and a mid-season break might be an idea. I still haven't got on to anyone else's season 4s either - so so much to read! I know mine was nearly 10,000 with footnotes and all
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if it was Much I'd probably be chased out of here with pitchforks and flaming torches! So that just left John (although I may be in trouble with a few people in here because of that *hides*)
Yeah - it's hard to be an effective mob on your ownsome... and my pitchfork's in the shop...
Do the words "incandescent" and "apoplectic" mean anything to you?
TBH although I initially called you every name under the Sun, I really enjoyed this and will be commenting more fully later once I've stopped hurling things at the screen every time I read it...
(is that icon supposed to give me guilt? :P) I'm really sorry! I knew you'd be upset... Glad you enjoyed otherwise though, look forward to hearing from you when you've calmed down! sorrysorrysorrysorry!xxx
Really enjoyed reading this! Loved the little personal touches (like putting 'apparantly' in brackets when talking about Kate loving Robin) but more general comments later
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Thank you! As for the little comments, 'thats my style', as they say! Poor Much is so lost without Robin. Hehe I know, I felt so sorry for him when I was writing him all sad, but I thought it made sense and was justified, of course he'd be devastated at his loss. And I'm glad you liked the Much/Archer convo, it needs some sorting out I think but at least the idea came across well! It’s nice the gang finally gets to feel how much they need Much to keep things running smoothly. I've always thought Much should go on strike every now and again, just to remind them! Haha, I admit I'm quite a noob to Star Trek (got into it because of the awesome film) but when I found out about the red shirt thing I had to include it
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I actually don't mind Archer.. I haven't really watched him a lot, I was supposed to watch 11 12 and 13 to get to grips with his character but I could only bring myself to watch 11! Yeah, I think the friction between the girls would create a lot of tension in the rest of the gang but unfortunately I also think it's something that would happen! Well Dexter doesn’t seem like a good name to have if that’s what it means. how do you mean? I wasn't thinking of the scene with Much and Kate actually, didn't cross my mind! Does work quite well now that I think of it though... I love with when stuff happens like that! Yay, Will and Djaq :D too awesome to leave out of it. Haha nope, it's Auf Wiedershen Kate I'm afraid! Yeah I like episodes like that as well! And I wanted to have a nice light-hearted one. And thank you! I had so much fun writing stuff for Prince John, he's rather smashing!
I should have explained better, i saw in your notes Dexter means dyer/one who dies. So that's why i said it might not be good to be 'Dexter' if your a character in a story..
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I think you should submit this to the BBC right away!
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Thank you very much for commenting :) xxx
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Yeah - it's hard to be an effective mob on your ownsome... and my pitchfork's in the shop...
Do the words "incandescent" and "apoplectic" mean anything to you?
TBH although I initially called you every name under the Sun, I really enjoyed this and will be commenting more fully later once I've stopped hurling things at the screen every time I read it...
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I'm really sorry! I knew you'd be upset... Glad you enjoyed otherwise though, look forward to hearing from you when you've calmed down!
sorrysorrysorrysorry!xxx
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Poor Much is so lost without Robin. Hehe I know, I felt so sorry for him when I was writing him all sad, but I thought it made sense and was justified, of course he'd be devastated at his loss. And I'm glad you liked the Much/Archer convo, it needs some sorting out I think but at least the idea came across well!
It’s nice the gang finally gets to feel how much they need Much to keep things running smoothly. I've always thought Much should go on strike every now and again, just to remind them! Haha, I admit I'm quite a noob to Star Trek (got into it because of the awesome film) but when I found out about the red shirt thing I had to include it ( ... )
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Well Dexter doesn’t seem like a good name to have if that’s what it means. how do you mean? I wasn't thinking of the scene with Much and Kate actually, didn't cross my mind! Does work quite well now that I think of it though... I love with when stuff happens like that!
Yay, Will and Djaq :D too awesome to leave out of it.
Haha nope, it's Auf Wiedershen Kate I'm afraid!
Yeah I like episodes like that as well! And I wanted to have a nice light-hearted one. And thank you! I had so much fun writing stuff for Prince John, he's rather smashing!
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Pesky language.
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