Fic: French Defence (2/5)

[wastingyourgum]

Title: French Defence, Part 2
Rating: PG-13
Word count: 1522
Warnings: Violence (battle scenes)
Characters/Pairings: Little John/Queen Eleanor, Legrand, OMC (La Corneille - 'The Crow')
Disclaimer: Robin Hood is copyright to Tiger Aspect and the BBC. All Rights Reserved. No copyright infringement is intended, and no money is being made but John has

Comments

[roh_wyn]

OMG, you do like to hurt John, don't you? The poor man! *huggles Little John*

I'm impressed at how fast the action moves in this story. That's really hard to do. My hat is off, so to speak.

Finally, really great job with the section titles. :)

[wastingyourgum]

LOL - I've actually toned this down a lot due to recent goings on in 'Hope for Healing'. This was originally written 10 months ago, way before HfH was even started!

I feel I should point out that I know nothing about chess except what all the pieces are called, how they move and that white goes first. Allan has tried teaching me but I guess my brain just doesn't work that way...

I can't even remember now how the idea for the section titles occurred - but I'm glad you like them :)

[roh_wyn]

I'm really enjoying this so far, fwiw. I think it's the combination of a journey and a mystery. Well done...

I am, quite possibly, the worst chess player in the world, but I can appreciate decent word play. :)

[jagnikjen]

Ah, poor everyone. I'm on pins and needles to see how it plays out. Another great action sequence and I'm right there with Eleanor, feeling helpless.

Fantastic job, as usual.

[wastingyourgum]

Thanks!