Comments | treatallanright: Ficlet: Tailoring

mideltone_one in treatallanright

Ficlet: Tailoring

Mar 06, 2011 10:57

Title: Tailoring
Author: mideltone_one
Word Count: 608
Rating: PG
Characters/Pairings: Allan, Guy
Spoilers/Warnings: None
Summary: Allan reacts badly to his tailor
Disclaimer:The Robin Hood characters written about here belong to Tiger Aspect and the British Broadcasting Corporation. All Rights Reserved. No copyright infringement is intended nor is any money ( Read more... )

rating: pg, cat: ficlet (501-1000 words), char: allan, intercomm2011, author: mideltoneone, char: guy, cat: drama

Comments 4

meridian_rose March 6 2011, 12:21:13 UTC

I liked this a lot; you take us through our assumptions as Guy outlines them, and then spring the unexpected truth. And Guy understands and moves to comfort Allan - but still so much in character, undermining the tenderness just a little with a typical off hand remark.

mideltone_one March 6 2011, 20:57:55 UTC

Thank you.

I'm so glad the off hand remark worked. I didn't have it in there to start with, and then I couldn't decide if it worked or not, so I'm glad you liked it.

robinfanatic March 9 2011, 03:43:17 UTC

Ditto meridian_rose's thoughts. The offhand remark was a great addition. Perfectly in character.

mideltone_one March 11 2011, 20:53:38 UTC

Thank you. It's always good when you're in character. :)