Comments | treatallanright: Tipping Point

mideltone_one in treatallanright

Tipping Point

Jan 30, 2010 22:42

Author: mideltone_one
Title: Tipping Point
Words: 829
Genre: Gen
Rating: PG
Disclaimer:The Robin Hood characters written about here belong to Tiger Aspect and the British Broadcasting Corporation. All Rights Reserved. No copyright infringement is intended nor is any money being made. I don't own them - if I did I'd be too busy drooling to write! All mistakes ( Read more... )

rating: pg, fic, cat: ficlet (501-1000 words), intercomm, gen, author: mideltoneone

Comments 4

alesh101 January 30 2010, 23:15:27 UTC

Aww, poor Allan. A god peek into how he might have tried to recover from Tom's death.

Well done.

whytewytch4 January 30 2010, 23:45:39 UTC

Aww, poor darlin' Allan. Love how he can call his brother an idiot, but no one else can--so filial! Just please don't think I'm stealing your title when I post "Turning Point" which just needs a bit of clean up--as Rebecca pointed out, it seems we Allan fans share a brain (or at least a brainwave!).

Well done, BTW--very emotional.

robinfanatic February 6 2010, 17:55:46 UTC

I really like how you have Robs interacting with Allan, coming to pick him up, talk to him, etc., from his drunken stupor. Poor Allan. Nicely done!

omteddy2006 February 10 2010, 21:58:14 UTC

I really like that you have Robin as the one to bring Allan to the "tipping point." Too often Robin is seen as aloof, especially when it comes to Allan. This makes sense to me. Not only would Robin possible care (gasp) about his men, but there would be practical reasons for his needing to intervene. ( I don't want to imagine a hung-over Allan with a constant headache and dry mouth. I bet he would be a pain in the arse.)

I can picture Robin's face, grimacing, in the dark outside the inn as drunkien Allan risks blowing their cover. I can picture it vividly.