Evidently Unaware

Jun 09, 2010 23:46

Title: Evidently Unaware
Fandom: Criminal Minds
Pairing: Hotch/Reid
Rating: FRAO
Disclaimer: So totally not mine.
Summary: “So,” Reid says, eyeing Hotch warily, “I’m going to leave you here to freak out as you slowly realize that we’ve been dating for a while and you just didn’t know it.” Featuring oblivious!Hotch and aggressive!Reid.

A/N: Um... ( Read more... )

fic, six profilers & garcia (criminal minds), hotch/reid

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race_the_ace June 10 2010, 04:52:40 UTC
This was great. I loved it. You did great with the characterizations. And clueless!Hotch? Awesome!

Cheers,
Ace

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travelinthedark June 10 2010, 19:12:13 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad the characterizations weren't ridiculous :)

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rowena_dawson June 10 2010, 04:59:16 UTC
EEEEE!!!!

This is so adorable while also hot.

I LOVED Spencer's comment about the onions. I giggled out loud! :D

Great job.

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travelinthedark June 10 2010, 19:12:37 UTC
Thank you!

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dameange June 10 2010, 05:07:16 UTC
oh darlin', I absolutely loved this! made me smile like a loon and cackle like a madwoman. thank you so much!

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travelinthedark June 10 2010, 19:13:48 UTC
I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for reading :)

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csillagpor June 10 2010, 05:35:01 UTC
Aww, this was great! Incredible, really!
... )

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travelinthedark June 10 2010, 19:15:30 UTC
I totally agree about Reid- I don't think I'm even capable of writing a non-confident Reid. You know that boy is smug as hell ;)

And I don't mind the mindless babble- it makes me smile!

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daylyn June 10 2010, 05:36:30 UTC
*squee* Seriously... *SQUEE*

I. Loved. This.

A LOT!!!!!!

Fear my wrath, lowly root vegetable

That sounds so Reid-like (or Garcia-like, possibly). It's perfect!

Once he gets inside his office Hotch sits down and proceeds to quietly freak the fuck out.

Yes! OMG, this was so awesome. I loved, loved, LOVED Clueless!Hotch and the fact that EVERYONE else knew but him. I loved that Reid was confident enough to tell the team to just wait. I loved Rossi, and Morgan, and Jessie, and Jack, and dinosaurs (I have a thing about Jack and dinosaurs, don't you know?) I loved how their "first" date was just like every other one of their dates... except it included hot backseat sex. And then hot at home sex.

This made me so ridiculously happy. Thank you. I can't tell you how much I needed this today.

Awesome, awesome, awesome.

Um... I may be gushing now...

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travelinthedark June 10 2010, 19:24:00 UTC
I'm glad you liked it! I seriously, seriously wasn't sure I was even going to post this.

And I sincerely feel like Reid might threaten inanimate objects in certain situations (though I agree that Garcia might as well).

Also, I have a Jack&Dinosaur thing, as well... I don't know why.

But yes, thank you!!!

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m_elle_22 July 3 2011, 05:06:48 UTC
Okay. I've never cut in on a year old comment before, but really, it is so exactly what I was gonna say, so DITTO!!!

I don't think a middle aged man realizing he is bi for the right guy has ever had it easier... not self pressure at all. It was adorable. Excellent job.

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