Bare: Five Things (5) (Jason/Peter | K to M | 583w total)

Apr 28, 2007 00:14

[ Jason/Peter | K to M | 583w total | 2007-04-28 | Mirror ]
Five... positions Jason and Peter, well, you know; places they never got to go; seconds Jason couldn’t breathe around Peter; lives they could have lived; prayers Peter prayed.

Five Things )

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left_of_weir June 15 2009, 02:04:18 UTC
Hi! I got here through the delicious tags, and I got into the Bare fandom late. I love how Peter and Jason never got to tomorrow, I love the exuberance of the Soho sentence that matches the setting and the milieu, I love the solid imagery of Peter pressing Jason against a brick wall with a "slow-rolling cant of his hips". Thank you for this.

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trascendenza November 5 2009, 00:32:58 UTC
And thank you for the kind words! <3 My favorite Bare author is theswearingkind, so if you're ever looking for more of these two, I'd definitely check her stuff out :)

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pinkielephant November 7 2009, 22:29:09 UTC
Holy shit jesus. Rereading this like however many years later and I'm still crying.

1. The second their last kiss ended; he’d given all his air to Peter.

so.

Good work making a timeless piece.

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trascendenza November 9 2009, 04:51:52 UTC
Wow. Thank you so much for this comment, I really can't even explain how touched I am to hear that. <3

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