Primeval: Cats and Dogs (Connor/Stephen | K | 100w)

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[ Connor/Stephen | K | 100w | 2007-05-02 | Mirror ]
Connor is lost in the rain. Bugger. (Written for primeval100 challenge #2: lost.)

Comments

[entangled_now]

A perfect Connor voice in 100 words. That was really very good, my personal fond-ness for rain stories notwithstanding.

[trascendenza]

Thank you! It was originally going to be a drabble about him angsting over Tom but he protested and said he wanted to go get it on with Stephen, hahaha. Can't say I blame the boy.

[telperion_15]

I dream of starting my fics with a first line as good as this! Your Connor voice is great.

And I am definitely going to use the phrase 'creatively wandering' next time someone accuses me of being lost!

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First lines can be tough. I think the ones I'm always happiest with are the ones the characters "tell" me, if that makes any sense (and doesn't just sound like a nice euphemism for "I talk to myself" *g*)

And thank you! I'm sure Connor creatively wanders a lot, so you'd be in good company :D

[cordeliadelayne]

Very nice, I like the idea of him "creatively wandering".

*small voice* Though he'd be using a mobile, not a cell phone :D

[trascendenza]

Thanks! :)

Eeep, and thanks for pointing that out. I need to get myself a Britpicker beta, otherwise I'll miss details like that every time I try and write something. ._.

[fredbassett]

Just found this! Yes, love your Connor voice, particulary the first and last lines.

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Thanks so much! :)