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[transposition73]

Minus One Day
supernatural || sam&dean; dean/ofc
r
spoilers through "all hell breaks loose part two"
inspired by griseldajane's art

Five days, five days, five days. It pounds in Sam's ears like his own heartbeat.
909.
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if you live to be a hundred, i want to live to be a hundred minus one day so i never have to live without you.
{a. a. milne}
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Comments

[zelost_mind]

Oh, Sam and Dean.

It was quiet and lovely and ouch all at once. Thank you.

[transposition73]

Oh, thank you. :>

[iamstealthyone]

Ow.

*sniffles*

Really nicely done. I ache for both boys here, with the deadline looming closer and no way out, though Sam did try.

Favorite lines:

Dean acts like he doesn't know, doesn't care but Sam's seen him out in the car, hand on the dashboard, eyes closed, lips barely moving. He's seen the Bibles lying out on hotel nightstands, always open to the same passage. He's seen Dean giving extra tips to less-than-gorgeous waitresses, sitting on the edge of his bed when he thinks Sam's asleep, holding his breath every time they get close to Kansas.

I adore these details. Oh, Dean.

Sam holds his breath. "I don't know how to save you," he whispers, finally.

"It's okay, Sammy," Dean murmurs, habitually, and drags his fingers in the dust on the floor between them.

They sit for a long time.

Such a quiet yet hurty ending.

*hugs the boys*

[transposition73]

Meep, thank you so much! :>

[quidditchkiss]

IT STILL HURTS. LIKE. I DON'T EVEN KNOW. I remember when you first showed me this and I thought it was really great, you know? But now, reading it all the way through, its like, SO INTENSE. Dude, I don't even know if I can handle the shit that Dean and Sam are going to have to go through in S3. D:

LOVELOVELOVETHIS.

[transposition73]

I know that there are going to be like, twenty thousand moments this season that will have the potential to make me cry. I really hope it doesn't come to this. D:

♥♥♥♥

[stephanometra]

Oh, God.

STOP MAKING ME CRY. OH MY GOD.

[transposition73]

I seem to have a talent for that lately. D:

♥?

[stephanometra]

♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥