Need some help!

[velvet_toucher]

Hello, I'm going to U.S.consulate to apply nonimmigrant visa next week. I wrote a essey in English to make it easy. Could anyone correct my errors and make it better please　;-) ?

Here is my essay!

Comments

[grizelda]

I could check it for you if you want, but I'm not a native English speaker so someone else might be more qualified! If no one else reacts, I'll take a look at it for you :)

[velvet_toucher]

Thank you ;'-) I think I don't need to make it perfect but I know it should be better (this is not an exam, after all). I would really appreciate it If you could help me out.

[diana_molloy]

There are no big errors. I wouldn't use the exact language you have but I am, for all intents and purposes, a native speaker. I think it not being perfect is better in what you are requesting

[velvet_toucher]

Thank you! I felt relief :-) Maybe I shouldn't worry too much...(Still, It would be appreciated if someone could correct my errors, though).

[tsubasa_en11]

Your essay is good to me, just fix some spelling mistakes and it will be golden. For e.g., matters. Good luck and all the best in studying!

[velvet_toucher]

Thanks alot for taking time to read it through! I didn't noticed that spelling mistake... I'll check it out again. I hope I can study in U.S!

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