[ficlet] your pain, my thrill

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Disclaimer: I own nothing.

Rating: NC-17.

Summary: Johann was the most beautiful, yet terrifying thing he had ever seen. Tenma/Johann. NC-17, dark. Non-erotic smut.

Notes: I didn't notice how utterly unoriginal this concept is till I saw this fic. So no, I did not plagiarise. It just happens to be an unfortunate coincidence that our concepts

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[tl__dr]

Ooooh, very hot. It's the sex I could always imagine going down between them - Johan forcing Tenma to enjoy something he doesn't want to enjoy, to pull him closer and to further try to break down his morals and prove there's no such thing as a Good Person. And it's hard not to get the sense that, around Tenma and Nina, this is his idea of showing affection, too. Anyway, totally hot, and I loved the imagery, too. :)

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Thank you so much <3

I admit that writing this was hard because I could only imagine sex between them like this. With Johann being very twisted about his affection and trying to break Tenma - it was quite a challenge to write (but an enjoyable one).

Glad you enjoyed the imagery - I was worried it might be overdone. And there's actually one factual error regarding the Dorian Gray portrait *coughs*. But still, I'm really happy you liked.

[shirogiku]

You write dark delightfully dark ♥

This actually makes me wish you wrote more dark.

Your Johann was fabulous. I haven't seen that much of the anime, but you do capture the feel of him. And the touch of affection towards Tenma - just yes, oh teh glorious creep!

Poor Tenma, really.

This fic felt very right for that universe.

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Sorry, I procrastinate with replies sometimes.

Especially when it's evident someone really likes my fic. And this fic is yes XD.

I don't think I was quite done with the manga when I wrote this. I don't remember, but yes charactersation was important to me, so thanks <3

He is creepy and poor Tenma, yes.

(this is non-con basically, Johann topping from bottom -- in very creepy ways).

[sabaku_lotus]

I can actually image this happening.

Read this on FF.net so giving a shout out here too.

If I didn't fav it already going to double check and do it now. It's just so dark and IC and whoa.....the ending broke me the most.

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Thanks a lot!

I'm always rather pleased to see people reading my obscure! fandom fics (not just Hetalia, Naruto or Code Geass :P) -- and it's even nicer when they like it too <3

Thanks for saying that this is dark and IC -- Monster is such a lovely series that hearing this means a lot to me!