[fic] Don't Do That Again

Jul 01, 2008 22:52

Disclaimer: I don't own a thing.

Rating: M

Summary: And I realised one thing. Sasuke had missed me as much as I had him. AU, some minor angst. NaruSasu.

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naruto, smut, angst, one-shot, fic, fluff

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lexibob July 1 2008, 22:29:30 UTC
*__* That was lovely. ♥

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transient_words July 2 2008, 22:34:41 UTC
Thank you. Glad you enjoyed -- it means a lot. Your icon is heart-breaking by the way (I don't enjoy seeing Naruto upset, but the colouring and shading of your icon is lovely).

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momentofdelight July 1 2008, 23:40:20 UTC
This is total love.
wonderful, and definitely not garbage.
<3

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transient_words July 2 2008, 22:35:39 UTC
Thank you -- thank you so much. I'm relieved you don't think it's garbage. I'm really glad you enjoyed it.

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c_h_i_b_i July 1 2008, 23:42:54 UTC
This is wonderful, really. You need more confidence in your writing ;D Far from garbage. Too far to even mention the word 'garbage'. Loved every paragraph ^^

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transient_words July 2 2008, 22:37:11 UTC
Thanks. Yes, I do need more confidence -- not only when it comes to writing. I criticise myself when it comes to everything. Anyhow, I'm really, really glad you liked this. I'm immensely flattered by the fact that you loved every paragraph.

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transient_words July 2 2008, 22:38:04 UTC
Thank you. It means a lot that you liked this -- thanks again. I really do appreciate it.

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animeshon July 2 2008, 08:36:32 UTC
That was just beautiful. I especially loved the way you wrote Naruto's heartbreak at Sasuke leaving him.

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transient_words July 2 2008, 22:40:23 UTC
Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it -- I was worried about not being able to convey that. Pain is rather hard to put into words because, in many ways, it can't be described. I often fear that my writing might be empty or unrealistic.

So, rambling aside, I'm glad you thought it was well done.

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