[fic] Screw Destiny 1

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Disclaimer: I don't own a thing.

Rating: T for now.

Summary: Naruto hated bastards with the passion of a thousand suns. Too bad that his new partner is a combination of all that. NaruSasu, AU.

Comments

[m_buggie]

Oh great good bloody Lord, YES. Please do continue.

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I will continue. Thanks for commenting.

[animeshon]

I really love this so far, can't wait to read more. Your portrayal of Naruto and Sasuke was brilliant!

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Thank you. I'm glad to hear that the portrayal isn't OOC. In fact, I'm flattered you think it's brilliant.

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I won't go AWOL -- the fandom and Naruto keeps dragging me back. I'm glad that the interactions keep you excited, though at the same time, I'm worried. I hope that I'll be able to set a good pace for this story (and hope I won't disappoint). But, I'm so glad you like this.

[helreginn]

Dood, - as Boke-chan would undoubtedly say - you're writing a multi-chaptered fic, never mind the thing that led to it.

I'm sorry for the lack of anything *headdesks* on my part...but my life's all haywire right now. I'm busy...downloading things I had been craving for a year.

Don't go AWOL. Since you like the tripe I spew every now and then, I'm telling you, this is sounds very promising and amazing.

I mean, you are not outright stating anything, and this is very subtly worded - though I love the language you have employed. Anyway, even if it is so worded, one gets the picture and what's going on very well. It's comprehensible and that's good.

There's the nice NaruSaku friendship that I liked a lot! And Sasuke sounded so like himself! Mmmm...lovely!

I really like the way you have written the cop-Naruto too!

I'll be looking forward to it. :)

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Yes, I'm writing a multi-chap, in spite of trying not to fall into temptation for the longest time.

It doesn't matter. I'm not reviewing as much as I should be, either. Though I read a lot and mostly don't say anything (for want of proper words other than "I liked it"). Then again, my time is limited and...

It does? You're making me nervous by saying that. I'm really scared that this will go nowhere, though I've been plotting it like crazy.

I could have worded this in my usual style -- descriptive and overflowing with imagery, smilies (I rarely use metaphors, I've noticed), but I didn't think it worked for this. Sometimes, less is more. I'm relieved it's comprehensible.

NaruSaku is love. I can't help myself; Sakura is such an important factor in both of the boys' life that not adding her would have been a crime (then again, Team 7 is my OT3). I didn't give her too much of a role in my older pieces and I'm trying to rectify that. And I'm glad Sasuke sounded like himself.

[helreginn]

*tempts* multi-chaptered a good. They give you much more avenues to write and working only on one-shots makes you repetitive.

Anyway, yes it does! It does sound promising. I mean, there's cop Naruto, there's cop Sasuke and you don't get any better than that.

As for plotting, as an experienced plotter - the only thing I don't really suck in - I'd like to remind you one thing. Whilst you are plotting, make sure it sounds like story and not as a piece of literature. Treat it like a story. I mean, you're wordy and that's amazing, but when you're writing a long story, there's a chance that you can lose your way and go off tangents.

Not that you'd do that. I believe in your writing prowess. :)

Also, comprehensible is good... and I think I'm reiterating. XD

It's a nice idea, and I'm really excited about how you're going to write it out!

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I know that one-shots are repetitive and limited, in a way. I've been worried about how repetitive I sound.

You think so? I've the plot planned and writing the second chapter, but am still worried (but you've reassured me, you really have). Although, I admit that plotting this is fun. Which it should be (no point in writing a story that isn't fun to you as well).

I've taken your advice to heart. I'm trying to be less wordy and think more of the story as a whole. I hope I make sense to you.

See, that makes me nervous.

And sorry for this late reply -- I'm typing this at an ungodly hour and am halfway asleep already.

[1radicaldreamer]

Yes it's worth it! I really enjoyed reading this, it's funny and absolutely full of potential. I'd love to read more!

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Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed and would love to read more. It makes me feel motivated.