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Apr 20, 2006 03:39


Title: First Meetings
Fandom: Naruto
Characters: Kakashi, Rin, Obito, and the Yellow Flash
Phrase: #10 You have some skill.
Ratings: PG
Synopsis: Hardly love at first sight.


As always, the first meeting is usually fairly awkward, especially when one person is an antisocial prodigy to begin with, and the other two are slightly in awe and fear of the ( Read more... )

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shiny_glor_chan April 20 2006, 16:38:56 UTC
Aw, poor Kakashi got kicked in his special place... Hehehehehe... Yay Rin!

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ypaladinofchaos April 20 2006, 21:13:07 UTC
*laughs* Yes, hooray for Rin! Surprising even a genius with her skills!

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snapple April 20 2006, 20:20:12 UTC
*gasp* Best story EVER!!!! XDDDDD

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ypaladinofchaos April 20 2006, 21:13:13 UTC
Thank you!

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psyched_kagura April 23 2006, 04:26:38 UTC
I apologize for never replying to this quickly, but I thought this was an amazing Kakashi-Yondaime-Obito-Rin meeting-story. Absolutely hilarious in tne ending as well, might I add. And this is exactly how I thought/hoped they would meet. It would explain why Kakashi is less, er, rude to Rin in the canon. 8D

There were quite some lovely descriptions, and vivid fighting scenes in this ficlet. It was overall very interesting and lovely to read for me.

Over all, I had no problems with this fic except for one nitpicking bit. Would Rin genuinely call Kakashi by name without suffix? She struck me as a very polite/courteous girl, and I thought she might have called him with a '-san' or '-kun' suffix before they grew to know each other more. Obito on the other hand is more understandable, since he and Kakashi were never exactly chummy with each other.

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