Title: First Meetings
Fandom: Naruto
Characters: Kakashi, Rin, Obito, and the Yellow Flash
Phrase: #10 You have some skill.
Ratings: PG
Synopsis: Hardly love at first sight.
As always, the first meeting is usually fairly awkward, especially when one person is an antisocial prodigy to begin with, and the other two are slightly in awe and fear of the
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There were quite some lovely descriptions, and vivid fighting scenes in this ficlet. It was overall very interesting and lovely to read for me.
Over all, I had no problems with this fic except for one nitpicking bit. Would Rin genuinely call Kakashi by name without suffix? She struck me as a very polite/courteous girl, and I thought she might have called him with a '-san' or '-kun' suffix before they grew to know each other more. Obito on the other hand is more understandable, since he and Kakashi were never exactly chummy with each other.
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