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[30_wounds challenge!fic: Forgery Catscratches]

Nov 06, 2007 02:30

Fandom: Yoroiden Samurai Troopers (Ronin Warriors)
Title: Forgery Catscratches
Author: Trahn
Theme(s): #5, Catscratches
Pairings/Characters: Sanada Ryo / Hashiba Touma
Rating: PG-13 / Light R (sexual situations, not graphic)
Disclaimer: If I owned them, I would be off doing something very different right now...
Summary: They can't tell the others ( Read more... )

14, yst, ryo/touma, 30_wounds

Comments 4

gutterkitty November 6 2007, 08:38:26 UTC

I must confess that I cringed a bit at the notion of Ryo/Touma. It's been a long time since I've read anything in the YST fandom that bordered on pairings. I'm so used to what used to be so popular, but I like this. I like how you painted the image of two people in love, without having to delve into descriptive relations. It's very peaceful in a way. Much more enjoyable then the Seme/Uke dominant thing that has been so popular for so long and much more akin to what I feel real love is like.

Very nicely done. I really enjoyed it.

trahn November 6 2007, 14:55:52 UTC

I understand what you mean - I didn't used to be really into Ryo/Touma (I'm a huge Seiji/Touma fangirl), but.. well, I think it really works - most people don't think of it, 'coz it's not a popular pairing or anything, but Ryo and Tou do have a really interesting relationship in canon. It's all too fun to make it more interesting! :P

I'm glad you liked it! Haha, I try to make it as realistic as I can.

Sorry for the terribly long, rambly comment... it's early in the morning. xP Yeah, I'll blame that!

Anyways, I'm glad ya liked the fic. :D I'll have to work on more~ *shoves homework out of the way*

roninlvr November 7 2007, 19:19:13 UTC

This was nicely done. I liked how you described the little things that they did. Sometimes, it's the little things that keep a relationship going. I also liked the reasons for not telling anyone else.

I am a die hard Seji/Touma fan, but I did like this.

trahn November 10 2007, 00:45:01 UTC

I know what you mean. :D Thanks very much! I'm glad you liked it.

I'm a huge Sei/Tou fan, too. I actually have a couple of challenge community claims for them, so keep an eye out :P I'll be writing for them!