And What I Wanted to Say (Original, Kate/Greg, PG-13)
Disclaimer:Title and Lyrics from Ben Folds Selfless, Cold, and Composed
Summary: She's waiting for Greg. He's already in never never land.
AN: This was also written for class, using Alice Adam's fiction formula for writing action scenes. I thought it was going to be constraining but it was strangely focusing. Cool.
( staring blankly and telling me to have a nice life. )
Summary: She's waiting for Greg. He's already in never never land.
AN: This was also written for class, using Alice Adam's fiction formula for writing action scenes. I thought it was going to be constraining but it was strangely focusing. Cool.
( staring blankly and telling me to have a nice life. )
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I love Kate, I love the little paradoxes at the beginning and I hate Greg and am so glad that Peter punched him at the funeral.
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I approve? IDHave words right now, m'sleepy!
I like this better than the play thing, it's more like...the play thing was obvi good, but a little more generic, I like this. It seems a lot more...them, maybe just Kate because I know Kate better even though you always make me play Greg. But like...I don't know, it seems almost like Kate was trying to take control of it? And Kate's probs super controlling, so that works! ...ILU, grandma.
You made me look for the Ben and Rob shit which I enjoy, btdubs.
I also like the...how, at all the dialogue, most of it doesn't end in he says or whatever, but the dialogue runs into something else. You know what I mean.
Now I should shut up, I don't even know what I'm saying.
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