Thirteen Ribbons: A View of the Ribbon

Jul 19, 2009 20:49

A VIEW OF THE RIBBON ( Read more... )

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viqsi July 20 2009, 05:12:15 UTC
VIQSIN WANTS MOAR. *twitch*

Viqsin also is very much not trusting this Ira character. Anybody who's that unusual with that strange of a background with *that* much talent starting out (first place?) clearly has something freaky going on. But I'm paranoid like that.

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tracerj July 20 2009, 06:40:29 UTC
I'm glad you're enjoying this!

And yeah, Ira really is the enigma right now, and the unknown can be scary. Don't worry, it will all become clear eventually.

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circuit_four July 20 2009, 07:50:28 UTC
OK, yeah, this is totally reminding me of Animalympics too. ^_^

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tracerj July 20 2009, 07:57:40 UTC
Hopefully only in the best ways. *grin*

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circuit_four July 20 2009, 07:59:52 UTC
I think I like your characters better. :)

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tracerj July 20 2009, 08:03:34 UTC
And I'm sure it has nothing to do with the crossdressing, hypnosis, transformation, or robotics. It's all about the names, right? The really creative names?

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kyn_elwynn July 20 2009, 09:23:41 UTC
Damn. I wanta Quanta. RIGHT NOW!

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momentrabbit July 20 2009, 12:02:42 UTC
we can only wonder what’s happened to him in the meantime and what’s going on in his head right now as he gets ready

"-*PIDSTUPIDSTUPIDSTUPIDBZZZZZZZTwaysapleasuretobepartoftheteamandstrivetowardsachievBZZZZZZZT(sadsnowmiauxinsnow)BZZZZZZZT*STUPI*-"

And repeat. ;D

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tracerj July 21 2009, 00:03:38 UTC
Something like that. *grin*

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feech July 20 2009, 20:05:30 UTC
I presume you've seen and <3'd Rollerball?

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viqsi July 21 2009, 00:01:37 UTC
That movie - the original, not the G-dless hack remake - is at many times the alpha and omega of my existence. I love it SO MUCH.

Although I would probably prefer to be one of the Executives talking Jonathan down. Mr. Bartholomew did, frankly, a piss-poor job of it. Although I imagine he was given panicked and rushed instructions to begin with, so I guess you can't entirely blame him. Mostly.

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feech July 21 2009, 01:14:32 UTC
G-dless hack remake? What G-dless hack remake? There is only one Rollerball. ;) ;)

Um, yeah. We saw that one. I refuse to bless it with the name Rollerball. It was less of a remake and more of a mess, so I don't think it deserved to call itself that.

Where's the inspiring ending?!

Anyway, I kind of like that the talking Jonathon down thing goes poorly-- it lends this sense of "Omg this could all go so badly"-- a sort of dark suspense every time the movie is viewed, as if one can't possibly be remembering the real ending.

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viqsi July 21 2009, 01:35:23 UTC
See, I keep thinking "what a waste". They could have used his retirement as a boost to the society, and yet they completely flubbed it by panicking and demanding an immediate out. The guy was already widely known; the damage from his existence was done. The *worst* possible thing they could have done was give him not only a chance to recognize what he could do, but reason to do it!

I'd have the executives responsible fired, except that, well, I think that'll take care of itself. :)

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