so we're helpless in sleep and drowning

[tracedust]

Title: so we're helpless in sleep and drowning
Pairing: Harry/Louis
Rating: PG-13
Summary: We have swallowed him up, they said. It's beautiful, it really is. Set between Australia and Sweden. 
Word Count: ~4,200
Warnings: Mentions of sex, evil!management, far too many angsty Louis rants and general self-loathing.
A/N: So, I guess I write fanfiction

Comments

[lissa_bear]

This is so, so lovely. The emotions are beautiful, painfully so because they're so huge. And they're too big to hide, and trying to hide them is like trying to squeeze into a tight space and then not being able to work your way back out of that space again. God, I can't even tell you how many feelings this gave me. Seriously. Brilliant writing.

[tracedust]

Thank you so much! This was basically just an outpouring of all my H/L feelings so I'm glad it translated well and wasn't just one big splattering of dskddjfkldJSDAFDKFLSKI LOVE THEM SO MUCH. Because that's what it feels like most of the time.

I really appreciate your comment ♥

[tracedust]

Thank you so much!!!

OH GOD THAT SONG I KNOW RIGHT. Oh reckless abandon, like no one's watching you. I'll never be over it.

[lyricsandhearts]

Oh gosh, this is absolutely lovely, I love it to bits. Gorgeous writing, emotions packed tight and threatening to break through. Just what I love in a Harry/Louis fic. Thank you for writing this. ♥

(And I love the Siken references! *g* I actually wrote a couple of pieces inspired by his work for 1D a few weeks ago. Glad to see a fellow fan around these parts!)

[tracedust]

Thank you so much!

It actually hurts how well Siken's writing fits with Harry/Louis.
And more!! YES GOOD. I'm gonna go read your stuff right now ♥

[emotivelanguage]

Omg this caused me to experience so many emotions! Amazing, I loved it :)

[tracedust]

I'm glad! ♥ Thanks for commenting :)

[pendules]

gosh, i loved this a lot. ♥

[tracedust]

thank you so much! that really means a lot to me because you have your own author tag on my delicious account and i pretty much think you're amazing lol ♥