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toxic_apiaceae

BF Entry: All-Stars

Jan 16, 2011 12:09

Wooooo! I did it! busted this thing out in a couple hours. Hopefully there's nothing too glaringly wrong with it. Anyway, this is a continuation of my entry from week one. i don't think it's necessary to read week one, but in case anyone wants to the link is here

Word count is1204 -- a VAST improvement over last week's epic length story. Hope ( Read more... )

week 2, brigits_flame

Comments 10

pipisafoat January 17 2011, 02:23:45 UTC

preeeeeeeeeeeeeeetty

toxic_apiaceae January 17 2011, 12:24:11 UTC

AHAHA!!! I forgot to mention at the top that this one was dedicated to you and Dani, seeing as you liked the first one so much. Must edit that....

pipisafoat January 17 2011, 18:50:07 UTC

i am impressed that that was my idea of a smart comment last night.

toxic_apiaceae January 17 2011, 21:45:53 UTC

I am impressed that you're impressed.

so_wordy January 17 2011, 02:55:14 UTC

I think my favorite part of this piece is when your characters have their first music lesson. It's beautifully written. I can feel the chirps of the birds and the drops of water on wood.

A lovely tribute to music. <3

toxic_apiaceae January 17 2011, 12:20:45 UTC

*bows* Thanks, wordy! That means a lot to me.

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toxic_apiaceae January 18 2011, 13:15:23 UTC

Thank you, thank you! Much appreciated, thorarar!

keppiehed January 18 2011, 11:37:08 UTC

The flow of this story is so natural. I have been enjoying it so much. It is easy to read, and I am immersed in the characters and the world you have created. It all seems so effortless, which means that #1) It probably isn't and #2) it is a job very well done. Thanks so much for sharing!

toxic_apiaceae January 18 2011, 13:13:06 UTC

Awww, thanks, keppie!

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toxic_apiaceae January 24 2011, 01:58:40 UTC

Aw, thanks, Dani! I have a lot of fun writing Kess. She's just ... so sweet and bubbly. She makes ME happy to write.

I definitely will be continuing this one. It'll probably become my NaNo project this year because I do want to explore the world further.