Comments | tousled_quill: Ficlet; Sirius/Remus; What Remains

tousled_quill

Ficlet; Sirius/Remus; What Remains

Jul 01, 2006 18:15

Title: What Remains
Pairing: Sirius/Remus
Rating: PG? PG-13?
Word Count: 180
Summary: A bright, brief memory.
A/N: Still working on the longer Sirius/Remus, but thought I'd drop this in. Written for the first challenge over at dogdaysofsummer, warm stone.

( What Remains )

dogdaysofsummer, sirius/remus, ficlet

Comments 40

rosemaryandrue July 1 2006, 22:58:30 UTC

That last paragraph sent shivers down my spine. Beautiful.

tousled_quill July 1 2006, 23:02:19 UTC

:) Thanks; glad you enjoyed it!

badfeeling July 1 2006, 23:09:04 UTC

Oh my god, my eyes just to sting and before I knew it they were watery. I -- just. Wow.

tousled_quill July 1 2006, 23:11:59 UTC

::Blushes like whoa::

Thank you!

purple_chalk July 2 2006, 00:08:04 UTC

You make me cry in front of my Pack. How the hell is Kirby to be an effective alpha wolf when she is CRYING in front of her PACK? *flings self at you*

tousled_quill July 2 2006, 00:22:34 UTC

*Catches you* I had no intentions of making you cry in front of your pack, love. But we both know that if any of them give you trouble they'll come to unpleasant ends, yes?

(And secretly, I'm glad you cried, because it means I put the proper amount of emotional whatsits into this. Also, should I just jump ship and embrace the fact that I'm probably just as Sirius-y as I am Remus-y?)

purple_chalk July 2 2006, 00:29:34 UTC

I'm going to take advantage of your Siriusness so hard if you keep it up, just you watch. I may well recruit you for something... *tailwag*

tousled_quill July 2 2006, 00:30:53 UTC

*WANTS TO BE SIRIUS SO HARDCORE OH MY GOD I WILL BE RECRUITED. FOR. ANYTHING. IF I GET TO PLAY SIRIUS*

Um. I mean. I might be open to the idea, if you, uh, wanted me to.

*cough*

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musesfool July 2 2006, 00:13:57 UTC

*sniffle*

Lovely.

tousled_quill July 2 2006, 00:24:55 UTC

Aww, I'm glad you liked it!

sambethe July 2 2006, 01:06:50 UTC

I love how you capture what memory retains here.

Also, I agree with musesfool, *sniffle*.

tousled_quill July 2 2006, 20:59:23 UTC

I'm glad you enjoyed it.

And, heh, I agree with musesfool too. But keep watching...my Sirius muse is bound to give me a few happy moments, right?

sambethe July 3 2006, 01:33:45 UTC

But keep watching...my Sirius muse is bound to give me a few happy moments, right?

I said the same thing to myself when I was done writing yesterday. Here's hoping.