sweet revenge

[tothethirdbar]

My first (*GASP*) Harry Potter fic.

Inspired by my new fiend friend, im_is_a_zombie , who is frakkin' made of awesome.

WARNING: SPOILERS. FOR. DEATHLY. HALLOWS.

Serious business, folks! Again, if you don't want to know, THEN DON'T READ IT. Jeez. It might be an alternate scene but the death in it does actually happen. It's still spoilerific

I am warning you. Do

Comments

[greendresswings]

love it! it's more modern / casually written than the actual books, but you pull it off!

[tothethirdbar]

Yeah, I can't exactly get the "older" feel yet, but I'm working on it. :) Thanks!

[im_is_a_zombie]

That was quite amazing dear!

I adored it, I adored his inner struggle and I adored Luna's well...Luna-ness.

[tothethirdbar]

Thanks!

Luna's Luna-ness is always fun to write!

But not as fun as some of the spoofs I'll be writing soon.

VOLDE-MART! XD

[im_is_a_zombie]

xD
Voldemort as Eddie Izzard:

Voldy: YOU! Cake or death?
Random dude: Uhh, cake please?
Voldy: Very well, give him cake.
Voldy: YOU! Cake or death?
Random girl: Uhh, death? No, cake, cake cake!
Voldy: Ahhh, you said death first!
Voldy: You know what, screw this... *AK's them all* *Walks over to fallen cake and munches on a piece as he walks out of the room*

[lostinjared]

That was brilliantly written and I loved the downfall of Bellatrix, rather than the usual flash of green light... she went out with a crash! XD GO NEVILLE!

[tothethirdbar]

Yeah, I didn't really want Neville to use an Unforgiveable Curse on him, 'cause that's just not how he is. At least, that's not how I see him. But knocking pillars on someone? TOTALLY NEVILLE! ...rofl.

Thankeh.

[_redneckbitchx]

Really good. You should write more fanfic. :)

[tothethirdbar]

Thankya! I've written more fanfic, but some of it's just crap, hah. I might make a journal to post my fanfic, or just make my icon journal a writing journal, too.

[ajadedmelody]

I liked it. There isn’t enough Neville centric fic for DH.

Despite the situation, the “ACCIO LUNA” made me LOL. But then again, the ACCIO HAGRID line in DH had me rotfl too.

[tothethirdbar]

No, there really isn't, is there?

*hee* That was meant to make people giggle, actually. I laughed at "Accio Hagrid" and I just had to do it. XD

[ajadedmelody]

Nope. ): Much George fic (not that i'm complaining, but), not enough Neville.

and then he rotflpwns Bellatrix.

I thought that was a fitting death for her because I just can't, you know, actually see Neville ever using an unforgivable.

[tothethirdbar]

Ooh, I haven't read any George fic. Any recommendations? ^^

Nah, I can't see him using one, either. Not after seeing what one of them did to his parents.