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Aug 05, 2008 00:48

Title; What Goes Around
Chapter; o2
Previous Chapters; o1
Fandom; Resident Evil
Word Count; 3,838
Rating; R for swearing and toplessness!
Suggested Listening; um to be edited I can't think of anything right now and the music I was listening to while writing this doesn't actually fit 8D
Notes; Wow so uh. Chapter 2! Two years later! At this pace, I' ( Read more... )

pairing: leon/claire, story: what goes around, fic: het pairing, fandom: resident evil

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eikesjacket August 5 2008, 18:36:00 UTC
I like the way you wrote Claire as being particularly aggressive. I always imagined that if anything were to ever happen between her and Leon, she would be the one to get things going. Great stuff.

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hobohunter August 5 2008, 23:10:28 UTC
I'm glad that you finally decided to write a second chapter! lol

Gah Chris ruined everything! T_T what bad timing! xD

This was written very nicely, I hope to see another chapter up sometime. I hope that it doesn't take 2 years though! haaha

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tripping_fruit August 6 2008, 00:16:35 UTC
OH FUCKING CHRIS. THE WORLD'S BIGGEST COCKBLOCK.

dsjljgflsklfksk i have been waiting so long for this you have no effing idea, ahahahahahah SO GOOD.

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offensive August 6 2008, 00:20:53 UTC
What, so long? You mean like two freaking years? XD

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offensive August 6 2008, 00:40:26 UTC
OH YEAH I FORGOT TO MENTION THAT I WAS TRYING REALLY HARD TO GET IT FINISHED LAST NIGHT SINCE IT SEEMED LIKE YOU WERE HAVING A SHITTY DAY AND I WAS HOPING THIS WOULD HELP SOMEWHAT.

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Leon will always be drawn to Ada??? anonymous August 7 2008, 19:53:57 UTC
"He knew a part of him would always be drawn to Ada. There was no changing that?????"

The part about Ada wasn't needed and it didn't make any sense and it really ruined the story. You can't be drawn to someone who did nothing but lie and try to kill you... that's insane. Leon is (or more like you are, the writer) forgetting the fact he knew nothing about Ada at all and that 6 years went by of not seeing her and that Ada didn’t give a shit about when John died... her so-called boyfriend.

The only thing that saved that was having Leon and Claire fuck... or almost.

This isn't the first time I've seen so-called L/C fans having Leon be more in love with Ada than Claire around here. Is this really a Leon and Claire website and are any of you real Leon and Claire fans? Or do you people think you can be L/C, L/A, C/S all in one?

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Re: Leon will always be drawn to Ada??? offensive August 7 2008, 20:27:04 UTC
I'm sorry I wrote them in character?

Leon says at the end of 4 that Ada is a part of him he can never let go. Much as I would prefer to ignore that, it's a canon statement, and Ada is very much a part of his life, so those of us who pay attention to canon fully work with that.

Did you even bother reading everything that wasn't smut lead in? Because there's a lot of compare and contrast between Claire and Ada throughout the chapter and I think I did a decent job explaining why Leon would choose Claire over Ada. Because Ada would end up screwing him over.

Also why the fuck can't someone have multiple pairings with the same characters?

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utada August 7 2008, 20:44:02 UTC
GO CHRIS!!!

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