As the Petals Fall - Chapter Two

[totayelnsuerngd]

Title: s the Petals Fall
Main Pairing: yumin
Side Pairings: ill be determined as story progresses
Genre: uspense, Romance
Type: haptered
Disclaimer: I don't own them.
Description Sungmin is no ordinary human; he is something called an enchanter, or manipulator. From a young age, he has had the ability to manipulate the world around him; creating things,

Comments

[blacknox17]

It was not a crappy chapter !
On the contrary, it was just beautifully written!
The entire Kyu section of this story was so kinda heartbreaking but touching at the same time. I can't believe his parents use his gifts as a talent show and neglect him so much. The maids being afraid of him was also sad. I just wanted to cuddle him! ^^
I'm just glad he uses his imagination to make his life a little easier.

And Minnie...will he ever get a break? And I can't believe his troubles are beginning!
This is pure drama and I LOVE IT :D
Super intrigued about what happens next hehe

[totayelnsuerngd]

I'm glad you liked it even though I rushed... It's annoying me cause I found quite a few errors when proofreading it and I need to change those asap.
Yeah... You'll see why his conflicts play a big part in this story though~ I could have easily given him a happy life, but his struggles are part of the reason why he does certain things... oh you'll see later :P Yep that's why he has those powers.

And I'm afraid Sungmin's life is just going to be miserable though out the duration of this fic :/ I love him though!
Hehe thank you~ I'll try and update soon [although probably not until next week because I have so much homework (stupid AP and honors classes)] And I have a memorial to go to on Saturday...

[blacknox17]

Ahhhh yes the life of a student lol
I'm so glad I'm done studying at uni now though hehe
Well, don't work too hard and get some rest in between tests :D

And don't worry I'll patiently wait until your next update !

[snow_meow]

Both Sungmin and Kyuhyun have such sad lives but at least Sungmin knows he is loved.
Everything Sungmin does is out of love where as Kyuhyun has no purpose in his life.

Of the two, I think Kyuhyun's life is more tragic.

[totayelnsuerngd]

Love can be a person's downfall. Both of their lives are hard in their own ways. Sungmin's is more physically hard, whereas Kyuhyun is more of an emotional one.

Thank you for reading and commenting~!