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totallyyourhero

OOC: Concrit Post

Oct 15, 2012 11:39

Comments or criticism on how I play Peter? Please post it here. All comments and criticism will be thoughtfully considered but those that are non-anon and/or provide specific examples (both of what has been done wrong and where/when in canon Peter does something that shows what I have done is OOC) will be taken most seriously. Also, if you post ( Read more... )

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haku November 13 2008, 20:08:58 UTC

This is less crit than it is just... crew mechanics, I guess.

I wanted to point out, with respect to Peter's plots, that it'd be really nice to get a heads-up or some form of discussion underway before you take some of the steps that you do. We've quite a few members of the crew, such as Angela and Noah, who canonically are all up in people's business and very effective at preventing certain things from happening, or barring further crises, but it makes it very difficult for the crew to react... retroactively, I suppose, to many of the things that you've had Peter do.

For instance, him taking Sylar's power. That's a major plot point, and something anyone in the Company would have tried to prevent, even had Peter been cursed. Or then him... killing Sylar, which just seems terribly out of the ballpark to me, especially when, well. Zach's just been stoned. Eden was stoned not long before. And. It's... Mohinder's birthday, and he had posted about having a party, and while it's Mohinder and shit happens when he's involved, it's just very ( ... )

totallyyourhero November 13 2008, 20:23:20 UTC

I can definitely work more on that. I hadn't expected Sylar to agree to meet with Peter and I apologize for not talking with the rest of the crew ( ... )

haku November 13 2008, 20:35:14 UTC

I recognize that Eden and Zach's stonings weren't relayed to all of the crew, but I feel like those plots in particular have no lasting damage and wouldn't have been at all preventable, given Jadis and her whims. As for Mohinder's party, er... I don't know, I think happy plots like that don't have to be cleared out by everyone? Not to mention that it wasn't a retroactive type of plan--Mohinder simply asked if he should have one in his post ( ... )

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haha, you and Eden are too cute totallyyourhero December 24 2008, 23:25:36 UTC

Thank you!!!

sent_back January 6 2009, 05:12:03 UTC

HEY. Mici speaking for Li~she wants to know if you would like Arthur to powerswitch with Merlin.

LET US KNOW.

totallyyourhero January 6 2009, 05:28:13 UTC

Hi Mici and Li!

And yes, that would be very awesome.