story

[totallypatrick]

even though i wrote it relatively quickly and did pretty much NO rewriting whatsoever, i decided to post a short story in here. it needs work, and i actually don't expect anyone to read it. whatever.

Comments

[justonegirl]

that was really, really impressive.
badass, patrick.
xox
rach

[totallypatrick]

that especially means something coming from a fellow writer. i appreciate it.

i like your journal a lot, and i'd love to read some of your stuff if you ever feel like sharing.

[justonegirl]

i will do so when i can find anything that's worth anyone other than the trashcan hanging out with.

[totallypatrick]

if it's worth writing, it's worth reading. i promise.

[waitforstars]

i read that and i wish there had been more. i really enjoyed it.

[totallypatrick]

i didn't really expect many people to read it let alone enjoy it. thank you very much.

(plus i can't wait to come hang out in your room some more soon.)

[attentionless]

that was an awesome story
thank you for sharing it

[totallypatrick]

thank you for reading it.

russ is in here and he says hi.

[kneesuit]

i liked it.

[totallypatrick]

thank you very much.

i like the hat in your user icon. if i were with you in a salvation army and saw that hat, i'd turn to you and say, "you'd look good in that hat." then you'd put it on, and it would look so good that you would decide to buy it.

[billion_fold]

good read, patrick.

the smoking in denny's threw me off.
that's so weird.

[totallypatrick]

thank you.

yeah, i know. i swear there are smoking sections in some denny's.

how is the hispanic version of me doing?

[billion_fold]

looking good.
and back in alabama until this semester ends.

alabama. pf.

[totallypatrick]

i used to go to alabama a lot. it's gay.