Fic: Sometimes We Stumble, Sometimes We're Tripped.

[totalgleekgirl]

Title: Sometimes We Stumble, Sometimes We're Tripped. (Thanks to ang_the_adverse for the new title

Comments

[crystalbunny5]

this was pretty awesome!!! It totally pulled me in!! I love the last line! More plz

[totalgleekgirl]

Sorry, there's no more, it's a one shot, and it was kind of hard to write this one. I'm really glad you enjoyed it though, and thank you so much for commenting!

[joshiemae]

That was amazing.
I got my angst fix and a happy ending, joyous day.

And I must say that Puck would probably make an extremely hot cop.
-fans self-

[totalgleekgirl]

I had been toying with the idea of Puck as a cop for a while now. I've read several fics where he's a teacher, and I like that idea, but I just see him as a cop...not sure why.

Yeah the original ending was not joyous, and I went back and overhauled it because I thought it got to angsty...I know I never thought I'd say that either. ;)

Thanks so much for the comment and I'm so glad you liked it!

[bardlover6]

This was beautiful. Honestly right now I'm so choked up with all kinds of different emotions that I can't think of anything else useful to say.

[totalgleekgirl]

Oh hun, thank you. I'm glad you got so into it. I admit this one was kind of hard for me, but it makes me feel a lot better to see responses like that.

Thank you!

[kirke_novak]

I would have reviewed slightly soon but after I finished reading, I decided to read it the second time.

That was truly fantastic. The conversation Puck and Kurt had over the phone, literally made me cry, I had to stop reading for a moment. The ending seemed so natural, completely not forced in any way.

Stealth!Artie FTW! I guess he'd know about the bad consequences of accidents.

Once again - fantastic!

[totalgleekgirl]

Oh a double read, nice!

Um, well it was never my intention to make anyone cry, just squeeze the angst out in anyway I could.

I'm glad you liked the ending. The original ending=sad...and well I kinda needed some fluff so I rewrote.

I'm so glad you liked it, thank you@

[shizam_i_am]

just.. wow. that was very compelling. and heartbreaking, i literally teared up. and the ending was very sweet.

and cop!puck is hot. and for some reason reminds me of vince from will & grace :-p

great job! thanks for writing and sharing!

[totalgleekgirl]

Thank you, you're always so sweet when you review for me!

Yes cop Puck seems to work...I didn't really watch Will and Grace, so I don't know what that means exactly, but thanks?

I'm so glad you liked it!

[shizam_i_am]

hahah, it's fine. i think hot cops just remind me of him. this is vince:

[totalgleekgirl]

Ah, well hello Vince...

And thank you, I always get all giggly and goofy when people say that they like my writing, thank you so much!