Fic: One of Us

Aug 15, 2011 12:41

Title: One of Us ( Read more... )

kurt, rating: pg-13, artie, puck, mike, angst, fic, finn, matt

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rofro05 August 15 2011, 16:45:59 UTC
You wrote something!!! Let me go read so that I can actually review.

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rofro05 August 15 2011, 17:01:52 UTC
So I love this! The way that you had all the boys react was so easy to believe. It was just so surprising that they didn;t know what to do. And I love the way that they all rallied behind Kurt when they got over the shock.

It was really great sweetie. And it great to see something new from you. I hope everything in your life is going well.

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totalgleekgirl August 18 2011, 18:40:03 UTC
Thank you darling! It's good to hear from you, I've missed you. Hope everything is good!

Life is going as well as it can for the time being! Since I have some free time and have actually gotten hit with a little inspiration, I might try and write a couple more stories!

Thanks so much for your comments lovey, and I'm really glad you liked it!

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jujuberry136 August 15 2011, 18:11:34 UTC
So nice to see fic from you again! Loved this story - from Kurt's mindset (which made me so sad) to the boys being stunned and not really knowing what to do to Puck's realization that he *really* messed up at the end. Nice bit of introspection there.

Thanks so much for sharing!

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ssfourniner August 15 2011, 21:56:39 UTC
Eeek!

This was great.

I am the anon (shhh) who prompted, and I love that you incorporated all of my ideas! I don't think you really deviated at all; I was looking for self-awareness (on everyone's part) and that's exactly what you portrayed!

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totalgleekgirl August 18 2011, 18:43:49 UTC
I usually try and incorporate the ideas that the OP wants. I'm so happy that you liked it OP and thanks so much for the comment!

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totalgleekgirl August 18 2011, 18:44:35 UTC
Aw thanks, things got a bit hectic for a while so I didn't have any inspiration to write anything.

I'm really glad that you liked this one, and thank you so much for your comment!

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david_of_oz August 16 2011, 00:58:23 UTC
Good job. I don't often read anything not slash, and Puckurt is a particular favorite, but this really worked beautifully. [though I did flash a few times on moments where the story could have turned towards - and it still could go here - Puck wanting to truly atone and then discovering feelings for Kurt. Lots of ANGST of course on the way to true love. But I'm a hopeless (hopeful) romantic...]

So yeah - really liked it, and hoping for a sequel or three...

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totalgleekgirl August 18 2011, 18:46:08 UTC
I wouldn't count on a sequel, but I do have a story that is kinda becoming it's own verse with Puck/Kurt as the lead pair. I'm working on part of it now. :)

I'm really glad you liked it, and thank you so much for the comment!

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alter_alterego August 16 2011, 05:08:13 UTC
Hey, sweetie! It was such a pleasant surprise to see your name pop up on my update list. I know life's been busy for you, but I'm always (selfishly) tickled when you have time to write.

Er... maybe "tickled" isn't such a good word for stories that make me angst like whoa. This one was no different. There were so many layers of hurt here beyond the physical blow: Kurt's hurt that no one stood to help him, feeling like the guys were all Finn's friends and not his own, the moment when the guys realized that Kurt thought they were all Finn's friends yada yada, and Puck's awakening consciousness.... So. Much. ANGST. (Yay.)

And this line for the win: "“It’s ok, I should have known better than to touch him.” Kurt muttered, and there was an awful lot that was said with Kurt not actually saying it." That last part was very true, and very painful.

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totalgleekgirl August 18 2011, 18:50:11 UTC
Well, I have been struck with some inspiration and a bit of free time (Doctor said to start taking it easier) and a few ideas are floating around my brain, so we'll see!

Yeah, I had a feeling that out of all the glee guys, Kurt probably would have felt that if any of them where his friend, it would be Artie.

I'm so glad you liked it darling, I actually managed to write that in the span of 3-4 hours, so I'm pleased with myself. Thanks so much for your comment!

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sj_r August 17 2011, 02:07:14 UTC
-hugs-

HI DARLING. HOW'S IT GOING?

Loved this! One of your more quiet fics, which breaks your heart gently and slowly, and stays with you a long time after.

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totalgleekgirl August 18 2011, 18:51:26 UTC
Hi Sweetness! *Hugs*

It's going as well as it can be for the moment, I'm hoping nothing comes along and ruins that for me lol.

Yes, the angst in this one wasn't a violent angst, if that makes any sense.

I'm so glad you liked it and thanks so much for your comment, you know I always appreciate it!

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