Fic: By the Grace of God Go I

May 24, 2010 18:57

Title: By The Grace of God Go I
Disclaimer: I don't own em, I if I did glee would probably have to be on a different channel.
Rating: R
Spoilers: Up to Home I think.
Characters: Kurt, Burt, Carole, Finn, Puck, Mercedes, Tina, Artie, OC's *The bad guys*
Warnings: Homophobic language, violence, language, gore, heavy angst, and imagery.Word count: 10, ( Read more... )

carole, burt, kurt, rating: r, artie, puck, glee club, mercedes, angst, fic, finn, tina, oc

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kirke_novak May 24 2010, 23:44:17 UTC
So you made me cry. Again. In a good way.

This story was terrifying, because, at the end of the day, stuff like that could happen. Happens all the time.
The emotions of everyone involved - from Kurt's fear to Carole's brothers hate towards Kurt - were so raw, so real. I think what hurt me the most (except for Kurt's horrifing ordeal, of course), was Burt pleading with his son to make it, telling him the story of how he was born prematurely and then promising him he'd be strong for him.

I love the ending, it was positive and put a smile on my face.

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totalgleekgirl May 25 2010, 16:19:37 UTC
I honestly don't know what possessed me to write that part, like if things weren't bad enough, and there wasn't enough angst to really go that extra mile.

However, I'm really glad you enjoyed it love, I'm glad you liked the ending, I kinda wanted to end it on at least a quasi-happy note!

Thanks for the comment, and against I'm so glad you liked it!

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hewlettluver May 24 2010, 23:45:43 UTC
aww you made me cry which made my mum think i was crazy so thanks seriously this was fantastic.Don't hate me but i kind of want you to add to this like who their date went and stuff haha keep writing more fantastic stuff

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totalgleekgirl May 25 2010, 16:22:50 UTC
Oh, sorry about the making you cry and making your mum think your nuts bit...but thanks!

I don't hate you, I was thinking of maybe, and that is just a maybe of doing a follow up to show what their date was like, and what it's been like since.

Thanks so much for your wonderful comment, and I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

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wow rokwynd May 24 2010, 23:56:44 UTC
I tend to run away from the "Kurt gets beat up" stories. You tell Kurt stories so well, especially when you include the Hudsons.

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Re: wow totalgleekgirl May 25 2010, 16:25:12 UTC
Oh thank you! I'm so glad you like the way I write Kurt stories! Unfortunately I do tend to write a lot of "Kurt gets beat up" stories, so I'm glad you can get past your dislike to read them!

Thanks so much for your comment and I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

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sj_r May 25 2010, 00:05:17 UTC
ghjbvmn -headdesk-

Because of the awesome.

Oh my god, I squeed when I saw you'd written this, I clapped in joy and now I'm grinning so hard I lok like a loon. I loved it, absolutely loved it; it was so, so angsty and so good, so good!

Artie looks pale, and slightly murderous, but simply holds his fist out for Kurt to bump, which he does.

My favourite line, because it's just so awesome. This fic is sickeningly wonderful, the subject matter sensitive but handled well, written gorgeously and I'm gushing embarrassingly, but sweetie, you really outdid youself this time! And holy crap at the length! I see now why I'm a pain in the arse!

I'm not going to list everything I loved the most, because that would be the whole damn fic, but I did enjoy the ending, and Finn and Puck were wonderful, and I really adored your Carole.

Thank you again for writing this! It's so truly legendary!

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totalgleekgirl May 25 2010, 16:29:01 UTC
Oooh that look like it hurt! Oh, I'm so happy you enjoyed it so much, and that you squeed when you saw it finished. (It was a monster, a run away train!)

I'm not sure if I should be offended or not that you found it sickeningly wonderful lol. Yeah recently I've been going for the jugular on these kinds of fics.

Yes, Michelle is mad at you btw, because she thinks I put to much of reality in this fic, and I may have spazzed out like, once, while writing it. ;)

Thank you so much for your comment love, I'm so happy that you liked your fill!

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sj_r May 25 2010, 18:41:33 UTC
Yeah, it did a little. Ow.

I think I scared my rabbit when I suddenly started cheering. He gave me the strangest look when I pumped my fists in the air.

I mean that in the nicest way possible! The way that you wrote it, I had my heart in my throat the whole time. It was gut-wrenchingly fantastic.

Tell her I'm sorry, but I'm my muse's bitch, and it isn't my fault if you're so awesome I inspire you to the extent you spazz out!

Liked? I loved it. Utterly, completely, loved it.

Nee!

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totalgleekgirl May 26 2010, 02:20:03 UTC
When I squee about something my German Shepard tends to howl with me. It's kinda funny.

Oh, well then thank you. I'm glad you liked it so much!

Eh, I think it's just cause I put to much "real" into it. Things like that have happened to people, to us, and it upsets her that I use it I think.

I'm so glad you loved it baby!

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ellie_19 May 25 2010, 00:09:21 UTC
Wow I cried so much during parts of this story! I really wish Burt had found the jerks before the police, so that he could've killed them for what they did to Kurt!!!!!

I love how Kurt didn't even blame Carol or Finn because they were related to them.

Do you think we may get to see a sort of continuation of some sorts?! *hopefull* :D Maybe Kurt and Noah after they have been going out for a long time and Kurt is self conscience about Noah seeing the scars? (sorry I tend to give ideas to people when I want to read sequels! That just shows how much I enjoy reading your fics) :D

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totalgleekgirl May 25 2010, 16:30:41 UTC
That would have been satisfying, but then he'd have gone to jail, which would have been counter-productive really lol.

Why blame them, they aren't them. I figured that's how he'd see it.

Maybe, I'm toying with the idea of a follow up to show how their date went and what's been going on since, but I'm not sure if I'll do it yet or not.

Thanks so much for your comment, and I'm so thrilled you liked it!

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ellie_19 May 25 2010, 19:59:12 UTC
Yeah that was the only downside to Burt finding them. lol

Oh please write the follow up I know it would be so great to read!! :D

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totalgleekgirl May 26 2010, 02:21:08 UTC
We'll see about a follow up, I already have a metric ton of prompts and other projects to work on, so we'll see how it goes.

Glad you liked it so much though!

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