Fic: Assumptions

Apr 24, 2010 16:38

Title: Assumptions ( Read more... )

kurt, rating: pg-13, angst, mr. schue, fic

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ellie_19 April 25 2010, 05:04:59 UTC
That was great. :D

I really liked the part where Kurt said "...but you don’t help, at least not me."

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totalgleekgirl April 25 2010, 17:42:25 UTC
Yeah, that was kind of my shanking line, lol. The one that was meant to sting a little, or well a lot.

Thank you so much for your comment, and I'm really glad you liked it!

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alter_alterego April 25 2010, 05:08:18 UTC
This. THIS.

As someone who is of two minds when it comes to Schuester, I really appreciated this fic. He wants to be a good teacher--but has this warped view of how school works. He has this idea in his mind of how things are, and doesn't open his eyes to see the reality. There's this disconnect.

That line you had when Will is thinking that "Kurt didn’t trust anyone really...?" He's too deliberately (?) short-sighted to see why he would be included in that "anyone," or that he deserves to be, in so many ways. (Can you tell this is one of my 'soapbox' issues?)

I just... I can't even explain it.

But you can--and you do, quite well, in this scene. It was so gratifying to see this conversation, to see Will finally GET IT. I like that Kurt didn't back down, that Will didn't have the perfect soundbyte, and that there wasn't a huggy ending. It hurt a bit, and that felt about right.

Way to angst it up, girl!

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totalgleekgirl April 25 2010, 17:44:45 UTC
hehe, thank you darling!

Yes, I too am of two minds about Will. Part of me wants to like him, but part of me thinks he's just to oblivious to exist in reality.

I'm so glad you enjoyed it though, yeah I can imagine that Kurt really just felt that once his dad was brought into it, that was it, and some truth needed to be laid down upon him.

So again, thank you so much, for your comment and your sweetness, and I'm really thrilled you liked it!

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boysinperil April 25 2010, 05:42:45 UTC
Oh my god hon this is just fantastic. It's everything I've EVER wanted Kurt to say to Schue, or someone to say it to him for him.

Too many hims.

Anyway, I think you know what I'm saying.

Things I loved best? Burt, of course - that what got Kurt riled up enough to tell Will off was the accusation against his beloved father - and ending with "he worries when I'm late" just shoved that knife in a little deeper.

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totalgleekgirl April 25 2010, 17:46:47 UTC
I know, that you know, that I know, that you know, I know what you meant. Or something like that.

Yes, exactly! Kurt did not appreciate his father being accused of that, and really, it's kind of obvious to everyone else what happens to him! So the "You don't help, at least not me" line was the original jab, and "He worries if I'm late" was the final twist.

Thank you for your comment love, and I'm so glad you liked it!

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sj_r April 25 2010, 17:19:32 UTC
Ohhhhhh, this was sooo good! I hadn't had a good start to the day, so when I came on and saw that you'd posted a fic, I cheered a little. And this was just amazing! I really do quite like Will, but honestly, he's too idealistic and optimistic and blind to reality. I sometimes want to punch him in the face, and Kurt! Oh honey, way to go! Stand up to the idiot teacher!

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totalgleekgirl April 25 2010, 17:48:12 UTC
I'm sorry your day started off poorly, I hope it's getting better!

I'm in two minds when it comes to Will, I'd like to like him, but he makes it kinda hard sometimes. He's wrapped up in his own world a little to much. Yes, Kurt needed to lay down the law, and lay it down he did!

Thank you for your comment hon, and I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

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xfindyourlight April 26 2010, 00:40:58 UTC
This rings painfully true. A+. Excellent, excellent characterization.

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totalgleekgirl April 27 2010, 03:47:44 UTC
Thank you, I really appreciate that you thought the characterization was well done. thank you so much for your comment, and I'm really glad you enjoyed it!

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