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Letters to My Uncle (1/2)

Oct 02, 2007 11:45

Title: Letters to my Uncle (1/2)
Author: lit_chick08Rating: PG-13 (this part) for language, a little violence, and suggestiveness ( Read more... )

pairing: claire/peter, fandom: heroes, fanfic: one shot, series: letters to my uncle

Comments 6

riane_71 October 2 2007, 19:44:08 UTC

This was just so breathtaking, I'm not sure I can even get the words out...

There is not one single thing about this fic that I don't absolutely love to pieces. The angst, the characterizations, and the Paire is just heartbreaking...

Is it soonish yet?

lit_chick08 October 2 2007, 19:57:19 UTC

Thank you so much. I wasn't sure how this one would be received, and I'm glad that you liked it.

The next part is shorter than this one, so it should be up probably by the end of the week.

riane_71 October 17 2007, 04:30:55 UTC

That story is sooo good!!

I'm going to read the 2nd part right now ^^

open_embrace October 17 2007, 11:45:25 UTC

oh oh OH!!!

fabulous work :) I'm impressed, actually, this story had a maturity to it that a lot of pairefic (and fanfic in general) seems to be lacking.

There were a few things i spotted, but nothing a beta wouldnt fix. you're clearly a great story teller and you have a beautiful way of stringing sentences together (yes, that is a compliment - a lot of stuff I've read, the author didnt seem to know how to correctly piece a sentence together...)

One thing you might want to fix - somewhere in there it was talking about the meeting at the jail, and you accidentally typed that She was HIS hero. I knew what you meant though :P

also, when using dashes in sentences - leave a space on each side (like just there). when you do it like this-eg-it actually joins the words up with a hyphen, which isnt what you're after. but as i said, a beta would pick up those things.

anyway, great work, i love it, i am now going to scurry off and find part two!!

oh, btw, i love Claire's letters - they're realistic and beautiful and oh-so-cute!

lit_chick08 October 18 2007, 02:01:18 UTC

Thank you. That's an amazing compliment.

And thank you for pointing out the mistakes. I don't have a beta in the "heroes" fandom, so I've been relying on myself to edit, and obviously I've been missing stuff.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

thanks much anonymous May 7 2008, 14:48:41 UTC

thats it, brother