Viewfinder: Onsen (Asami/Takaba NC-17)

[toscas_kiss]

I just realised I completely forgot to post my yuletide story! So here it is. Written for Icey, it's Viewfinder (aka Finder no Hyouteki), and an NC-17 Asami/Takaba PWP.

Title: Onsen
Summary: Takaba wins a free weekend at an exclusive hot spring hotel (onsen) - or does he?
Warning! Rough sex, of slightly dubious consent (though to be honest, I'm not sure

Comments

[clueless_psycho]

oooowww!!! this is awesomenesss!!! *claps hands* You should post this in club_sion or yamane_ayano to make the fangirls happy *laughs*

but really, who doesn't love an enthusiastic, genki Takaba? and we could not expect less than a smartly cunning Asami, eh?

Love it, totally love it, and sorry for the silly comment, I'm in a full "fangirl" mode now.

Thanks for sharing, I'd better dash off now, I'm late for work *laughs* *blows kisses* *slaps the entry into memory section for future reference*

[toscas_kiss]

Thanks! Glad you like it. Fangirl squeeing is always of the good! ;-D

[hieronymousmosh]

I can't remember if I commented on this at the yuletide page . . .

Either way, great job! Asami's *very* in-character with how even though he's close to being almost nice at the end there, he's still such a bastard about it.

[toscas_kiss]

Thank you! Glad you thought is was IC, I love Asami as a character. He's such fun to write too. :-)

[stokley02]

wow what a great way to wake up in the morning. Sort of drowsily looking around on line checking email and what not, then *click* and heavan....

I am a bad fangirl, cause i always seems to want Akihito to come around and see things in a different light. But then i'd probably stop cheering the sex scenes, so that wish is a bit of a double edged sword...

Thanks for the generosity of your yule-tide girft!

[toscas_kiss]

Thank you for the feedback! I'm happy to have entertained you. :-)

[stasya_lj]

Thanks so much for the fic )))
haven't read any Viewfinder fics in a long time, but I couldn't pass this one. Marvelous )))

[toscas_kiss]

Thanks! Glad you liked.