Save You part 2

Jan 14, 2009 03:51

Title: Save You
Rating: PG
Summary: Sometimes I wish I could save you
And there's so many things that I want you to know
I won't give up til it's over
If it takes you forever I want you to know that Notes: For mine and Nounou's twoweekversary >.> Even if it is almost 4 hours too late XD I told you I'd have it done soon? ♥ I promised you this ( Read more... )

l: oneshot, r: pg, p: akakame

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kawaiikame January 14 2009, 11:11:34 UTC
am glad he is kind of good now <3333
i felt so sorry for jinjin ~^
^O^ I love it ~

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kawaiikame January 14 2009, 11:13:01 UTC
ne plz try to update "A Pirate's Life for Me" soon? i really love it and soooo waiting for the new chapter :)

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death_note13 January 14 2009, 23:24:28 UTC
He's very good ♥
He manages to make me feel that way too
Glad you like it..

A Pirates Life, it'll be updated as soon as I get the smut written XD

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eragon22 January 14 2009, 15:31:31 UTC
This was so intense *_* Psycho!Jin i really pity though reading about him is entertaining
Thank you so much for this :)

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death_note13 January 14 2009, 23:25:08 UTC
He wants you to pity him. XD

But glad you like it ♥

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chained_akame January 14 2009, 16:58:16 UTC
It.was.amazing. Awesome.Pi is a really bad guy XD Poor Jin,having to go through all these...but I really love Kazu. Dresing up like Shuji...he was willing to do everything for Jin,ne?They so love each other...

Jin was really acting like a child sometimes.He was...funny.I shouldn't think he is funny,but there were times where I found him funny XD.

The bathtub scene really scared me.But Kazuya was there,so Jin would be ok^^

It was so gorgeous....I just couldn't wait,I had to come here and read it^^great job!

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death_note13 January 14 2009, 23:28:21 UTC
♥ I'm glad you like it. Pi...I love that guy, but he fit the part of 'delusion who's in love with Jin' really well >.> ooo that was part of the dream, but I'm sure he'd have dressed up like Shuji for Jin anyway XD

Well, the child parts...they're meant to be serious, but some people see them as funny, but that's fine too XD

It was hard to write...but yeah, Kame's there for him ♥

Aww~ That's okay. ♥

Thank you~

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endohmichi January 14 2009, 18:19:07 UTC
I really liked reading this. It was good for Jin to deal with the demons in his head. Pi's hopefully gone for good since Jin 'killed' him. Can you really kill a delusion though? We will have to see.

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death_note13 January 14 2009, 23:29:41 UTC
Thank you.
ooo well, there was this case a few years back where the schizophrenic "killed" his delusion, and started returning to a pre-schizophrenic stage...but he's never fully "healed" of course.

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endohmichi January 15 2009, 20:27:30 UTC
Jin doesn't really need to be 'healed' more like he needs to be able to better. Now I know he'll never fully be normal but he can adjust to life right? I really think that's all he needs.

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death_note13 January 15 2009, 20:33:49 UTC
Yeah, he can adjust now 8D

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isuk18 January 14 2009, 21:50:27 UTC
I read this 3h ago or so and I remembered that I had to comment but my brain's a mess so I'd surely need to read it again to make a proper comment but, though not as tempting, gotta start reading old Shakespeare's 'Henry V'' so I'll write you a most probably senseless comment, full of incoherencies and so on...

sljdvboerbv evil pi, kame was so cute and nice with jin and jin's evolution and problems and voices and everything and shuuji and kame and jin and dfsvbksvfirevbk ILU ILU ILU ♥ Why was my introduction sentence from above longer than the actual comment? Damn...

It was great, this will, once again, be something I'll come back to and read it again~ *hugs* ♥

Haven't talked in a lot, finals kill my brain ><

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death_note13 January 14 2009, 23:32:13 UTC
XD It's okay. ♥ Have fun reading your Shakespear.

aww~ ILU2~ and your comments are flaily and ♥

XD I...really like hearing that ♥

It's okay~ Whenever you can talk is fine ♥

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