Riptide Fic: "Army Of One" (1/1)

[torra]

Title: "Army Of One"
Author: torra
Genre: Slash, AU
Pairing: Nick/Cody
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: ~3,800
Warnings: AU, Underage (both 16, no sex)
Series: Cub Scout Universe: (1) "Scout's Honor" | (2) "Study Night" | (3) "Army Of One" | (4) "Father's Day" (to be posted in a few days)
AU Summary: What if Nick and Cody had grown up together? This is an AU

Comments

[tinx_r]

Such a sweet fic, babe. This is maybe my very favorite moment:

all of it is easy. Like a life we've already lived.
Totally yes. Lovely

[torra]

Thanks. And I really do thinnk that's my favorate line, too, it's definatly the one that sticks out in my head. I was a little worried about Cody being a touch OOC with his long bits of diologue (they refused to be re-written into smaller, less emtotional chunks), but I am very happy with that one line.

[catyah]

I just have to pop in here and say that I'm stunned there haven't been more comments on this fic. I think it's a beautiful fic, hon, and very well written!

[torra]

Awww, thanks, hon, I appreshate that. I am starting to get a little forlorn, but it's nice to know you guys still like them. I know I should really just wait and space these out more, but I just hate sitting on finished fics.

[seraphina_snape]

The panic attack was a very powerful emotional scene. Cody's fears are pretty plausible, and the way he just snaps and blurts out his fears is something I can see happening.

Great fic.

~ sera