Zugunruhe

Nov 04, 2010 10:32

Pairings: Eames/Arthur
Original prompt: Sorry about this fic, sorry I wrote it-- tell me about the story where I sully Richard Siken's good name.
Summary: The things that they are too afraid to want.
Notes: I'M DOING PRETTY WELL WITH THIS HIATUS THING, I promise, this was written before, fldnlfj;eanr why am I making excuses about this WHY WON'T THE ( Read more... )

eames/arthur

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clair3 November 4 2010, 03:39:15 UTC
awesome!

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weatherfront November 24 2010, 06:58:14 UTC
Wah-- thank you so much :')

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brittwinchester November 4 2010, 03:57:13 UTC
weatherfront November 24 2010, 06:59:09 UTC
Whaaaat no thank you so much for reading these things ;___; I'm so glad that you liked it...! ♥

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faekitten9 November 4 2010, 03:58:25 UTC
I want to immerse myself in this indefinitely...*swoons*

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weatherfront November 24 2010, 06:59:52 UTC
It would be the moast vicious of all circles!! But ahh thank you so much, sweetheart :')

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celerywench November 4 2010, 04:04:15 UTC
♥ Ugh why is your writing so splendid?!! ;-; (Which is to say amazing and longing for cities I dont live in. Also, Washington - is that DC or the state?)

Also, randomly, Edward Sharpe and the Magnetic Zeroes' Home kept popping into my head all the while (despite it being a lot more dancey-bouncy compared to the beautiful, subtle, somber tone of the fic).

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weatherfront November 24 2010, 07:02:33 UTC
I LOVE THAT SONG ;___; I'M LISTENING TO IT RIGHT NOW thank you so much for linking to it, ahh it's filling my heart with love, and I think I see the connection, that feeling of wandering and something echoing through a flat land-- and it being a story of two people-- ♥ haha that makes this fic sound better than it is, thanks to the song XD

(It is DC, I think...!)

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oh_so_blase November 4 2010, 04:04:19 UTC
oh. this is beautiful.
and in a way it makes me wish I knew what love meant. what it is.
i can tell how you filled the poetry prompts and I really like how you incorporated the feeling of them poems, and story line (? idk) of them without writing a fic that is just an extension to the poems themselves. i hope i'm making sense.
point is, i already adore your writing but this. this is just. I think this is one of the best pieces of work you've written (in the Inception fandom bc idk if you've written for any other so.)

also, Arthur stretches against him, skin melting beneath his touch.
i think the 'him' is supposed to be a 'me' and the 'his' a 'my'?...

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weatherfront November 24 2010, 07:07:54 UTC
Oh my goodness ;___; flje;anf;ejr thank you so much, god thank you for enjoying this-- ahh ♥ I thought I couldn't do justice to using the poems as part of the story, so I tried not to quote anything-- ;felk;allf;jl;a you are just. too nice

The pronouns in this are really back and forth all over the place, aren't they?! WHY-- I DON'T KNOW-- it's not like Siken does that-- I DON'T KNOW-----

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