Part three

[toria_phoenix]

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“Just a few more steps!”

“Lewis, come on!  Just tell me where to go instead of having this horrible blindfold!” Wilbur complained, the itchy fabric rubbing against his face uncomfortably. Lifting his hand, he went to scratch, when Lewis smacked his hand away.

“Stop that! Besides, do you or do you not want your

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[spyofsorrow]

/cry /cry /cry Aaah so sad, so beautiful! I love it.

[lostlightning]

I cried.

=)

[isa_alorah]

You have so very little for comment-age. D:
So I'll leave you my review, and comments.

This story was wonderful, and long, the way I like my stories. It could have done with a beta, for the quality of the writing. I saw a small handful of needed corrections, but the plot was... wow. I loved the way you wrote the important scenes out, and the emotion was just perfect.
There were one or two scenes where the angst was a little too much (refers to the Jamie-death explanation ala Franny) but otherwise, a healthy-enough dose of omg, aww, sad.

My friend, who I took my time to read aloud to, also says that she enjoyed it. Very thoroughly. Yes she did. Not just my readying out loud, though xD We're such kids on the inside.

~<3 We both love you very much for writing this! I love you to Reeses Pieces. 'o'

wow

[anonymous]

this has got to be the best damn fic ever?!I love the fact that they weren't really related... and that they were past lovers...

I seriously got goosebumps reading this...

you are damn good.... thank you for sharing this story... and please keep it up....

[miafria]

Incredible. People's emotions and reactions were so realistic (even if the story isn't). Wonderful job. Go you! I need to go read something happy now before I cry.