DONT EVEN READ THIS. I'M WARNING YOU!

[toreadore_rose]

TITTLE: Hello, Lust
AUTHOR: Me, toreadore_rose
SUMMARY: A Father finds himself suddenly unable to control his darkest wishes.
WARNINGS: Oh.... oh dear. Abuse, Anal, Angst, Controversial subject matter, Fetish, Humilation, Incest, Language, M/F, Minor, non-consensual sex, Original Characters, Oneshot, Oral, Other, PWP, Male masturbation, female masturbation,

Comments

[doomflower84]

Ummm...is it wrong that I enjoyed this? Perhapse don't answer that...

Anyway, I really like your writing style, and for the love of all things dark and twisted, I would very much like to see more of your work XDD

Also...For you... ...it still leaves something to be desired, but I've been preparing for my MSc interview and am about to start a new job, so have been a little preoccupied. Nonetheless, it is finished XD

[toreadore_rose]

Hey! Thank you for the longer review-- I will get back to you soon, its just been hellish. Just got out of hospital-- yuck >_<;

[doomflower84]

No problem...Like I said, I meant to get the review to you straight after I read the fic, but I kept getting distracted by things o_O Oh well, you got it in the end!!

*hugs* Oh dear, hope you're ok!

[kassidy62]

this is one of those pieces that gets to you when you don't want it to, nasty and lovely and hurtful and very wrong.

[toreadore_rose]

Ahh, this review made me grin real big~ So glad you liked; thank you for taking the time to comment! =)

[ali_wilde]

Abuse, Anal, Angst, Controversial subject matter, Fetish, Humilation, Incest, Language, M/F, Minor, non-consensual sex, Original Characters, Oneshot, Oral, Other, PWP, Male masturbation, female masturbation, Spanking, Torture, Toys, Unresolved Sexual Tension, Voyeurism, Water Sports....

There are not many legitimate publishers that will touch a lot of those warnings. Most steer clear of incest, rape (especially when called erotica) and torture.

[toreadore_rose]

Ah, well I didn't write it in attempt to get published, I just wrote it because it was in my head. Anything I would write in an attempt to get published would be a little more on the tame side.

Still, I was hoping to hear some outside opinion on it, considering it's the first time I've written something so... nasty.

[ali_wilde]

Firstly, I'm no expert.
Secondly, I'm not flaming.

Personally, I didn't like it but that's mainly because it hit a lot of things I dislike reading. Incest for one. Rape that is made to feel erotic for another. There is nothing erotic about rape or non-con, no matter what words you use. It is illegal and horrible and brutal. Your character is underage in a lot of countries so that also makes this paedophilia.

And, no, I didn't read it all.

But, on the plus side, I do think you have an interesting writing style. Perhaps developing it more writing something sexier, more erotic and with romance.

Good luck. It can happen, trust me. But there's not a lot of money in it.

[toreadore_rose]

Ah well-- you can't be blamed for disliking the subject matter; that's simply your own opinion. That's why the warnings are there, after all.

But I do appreciate the compliment. A lot of effort goes into my writing, so it's nice that you can still appreciate the style despite your dislike of the subject matter.

Oh, I'm not in it for the money; I just enjoy the writing =) Thank you for the well wishes.