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torakowalski

Timestamp 2

Feb 19, 2007 18:10

Title: Light Of Day
Pairing: John/Rodney
Rating: NC-17 for porn, again.
Words: 1425

ETA: Forgot to mention: This fic and True Enough are both pretty spoilery for Progeny. Sorry 'bout that.

A/N: purelyironic asked for True Enough, the next morning

( Rodney came awake in a rush, jerking upright, something between a groan and a shout caught behind his teeth )

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Comments 20

porntestpilot February 20 2007, 01:37:26 UTC

aigbnjl. Aww, god, that's so cool and kind of fucked up and awesome.

torakowalski March 1 2007, 15:26:22 UTC

*grins* Thank you!

silver_cyanne February 20 2007, 03:49:46 UTC

Lovely. It's so very them, and I love how they try to ground themselves in each other. You've got such a beautiful writing style.

torakowalski March 1 2007, 15:26:54 UTC

*blush* Thank you. I'm really glad you liked it!

ladycat777 February 20 2007, 04:29:11 UTC

Oooo. I love the exhausted sense of maybe in this, how awful it is to have something and not know if you really have it -- as twisted as it is, that's one of my favorite scenes from Progeny and this is an excellent extrapolation of that.

Lovely :)

torakowalski March 1 2007, 15:28:18 UTC

Thank you! And yes, I loved that scene from Progeny too... in fact I think it was the best thing in the episode!

steammmpunk February 20 2007, 05:45:18 UTC

It's beautiful and heartbreaking, the best kind of mixing of them. Oh, boys. Thank you for sharing this.

torakowalski March 1 2007, 15:28:52 UTC

Thank you!

purelyironic February 20 2007, 21:12:42 UTC

“I’m sick of wondering if any of this is happening,” John said. He sounded angry, but not with Rodney. “If I’m really touching you.”

“It’s only been a day,” Rodney reminded him. “Less than, really.”

John’s fingers clenched, they bit into Rodney’s shoulder hard enough to bruise and Rodney surprised himself by liking the feeling, craving it. “That’s a fucking long time to doubt reality,” John said and Rodney couldn’t really disagree with that because yes, god yes, it was.

These poor guys in this completely fucked up situation...
You really display their disbelief throughout the story. Wonderful sequel. I hope they can start believing soon.

Thank you!

torakowalski March 1 2007, 15:30:43 UTC

Yay, I'm glad you liked it. Sorry for taking so long to reply.

I meant to write you something happy where they wake up and are all "yay, we're real" but the damn story just wouldn't go that way!

purelyironic April 2 2007, 19:03:42 UTC

I don't think something happier, fluffier would have worked. You do not live through something like that and then don't doubt your reality.