AmnesiaJohn Fic

[torakowalski]

I've spent the last week trying to decide if this fic should be left for 14valentines but I've finally decided that it doesn't really fit with my theme (yes, I'm aiming for a theme, with 3 days left. Yeesh)

Title: His Way Through the Constellation
Pairing: John/Rodney
Rating: PG-13 (I know, I know, it's a lot of words for very little sex)
Length: 8200 words

Comments

[etben]

oh, lovely!

[wildestranger]

This is gorgeous, and such a delightful John. A most enjoyable read. :)

[eleveninches]

Very, very, very good.

[janne_d]

Woohooo! It is posted! (I made you multiply it by 4!? Good golly, feel free to complain about my big beta boots all you want...) Anyway, this is very, very cool. Which I have said before (I hope) but is worth saying again.

psst, you have some typos: They solar system should be the, and Elizabeth comes racing down the stairs and tries hugs them should be tries to hug

[torakowalski]

Noo, I love your big beta boots. They make my stories better!

And thank you, fixed. (This is why I should never change anything after you've looked at it!)

[tharaist]

They pull apart, a smile on both their faces, and for the first time, Rodney gets a look at his eyes. Without his memories, John's eyes had been clear and bright, almost child-like in their lack of pain. These eyes, the ones looking back at Rodney right now are Colonel Sheppard's eyes, older, wiser, and burning with affection.

"Hi," he says, stroking his fingers through Rodney's hair. "Remember me?"

*sighs happily*

Lovely story! I like the wistful tone, John being weary of his past, reluctant to remember.