Comments | torakowalski: Fic! "Believe In Something Like A Summer" Brendon/Spencer NC-17

torakowalski

Fic! "Believe In Something Like A Summer" Brendon/Spencer NC-17

Aug 31, 2008 00:40

Happy birthday Ryan Ross! I'm sorry, but this fic is not about you. It is about people you're pretty fond of though.

About a month or so ago, emilyray was writing a fic and I was writing a fic and we sent each other what we had so far. *She* posted hers the next day, whereas I got distracted by Shane Valdez and then Brendon threw-up on stage and then ( Read more... )

brendon/spencer, nc-17, fic, bands:patd

Comments 68

britchick5000 August 31 2008, 00:13:26 UTC

!!!!!
That is adorable. Oh Spencer, your emotional retardation is so very true to an early-20s guy. <3

Ryan folded his arms. “Fix my band Spencer or I will kick you in the head.”

Lol, Ryan totally watched Due South as a kid.

torakowalski September 13 2008, 15:36:24 UTC

Thank you! <3

Lol, Ryan totally watched Due South as a kid

*grins* and if he hadn't, Jon would totally have made him watch it for all the fake-Chicago.

harriet_vane August 31 2008, 00:13:52 UTC

Angry snappy defensive Brendon! Worried emotionally immature Spencer! Fantastic!! <33

torakowalski September 13 2008, 15:47:32 UTC

Thank you! <3 (The Brendon-being-carried-across-the-room was all your fault especially for you!)

makesomelove August 31 2008, 00:39:59 UTC

Oh God, I love this so much. Everyone in it is so great! Spencer's MOM and ZACK. THANK GOD FOR GROWN-UPS. The beginning was too precious, ugh, drunken giggling and sexy times, and the painful miscommunications, and Brendon's non-scary angelic smiiiiile and fixing it with communication! Spencer picking Brendon up, YESSSSSS. DAVID DUCHOVNY. I LOVE IT.

torakowalski September 13 2008, 15:49:20 UTC

Hee, thank you so much!

Your icon is mesmerizing, I can't look away.

revelininsanity August 31 2008, 00:56:22 UTC

That's so adorable! Eeek! Brendon is a manwhore on YouTube, Spencer put his foot in his mouth!

torakowalski September 13 2008, 15:50:17 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.

siubhlach August 31 2008, 01:25:44 UTC

Um...I am now going to quote large portions of your fic back at you to best highlight its splendid fabulousness, kay?

“I am svelte, Spencer Smith. Svelte and petite and, and something slightly more manly sounding that still means cute and pocket-sized.”

Oh god, I damn near fell off my chair. What an awesome line!

Spencer had a naked Brendon underneath him, wrapping his legs around Spencer’s waist and meeting his first tentative thrusts

Okay, I love that image. Something about the simplicity of the description packs a real punch. Very nice!

“So you decided to fuck Brendon? That’s not good logic. That’s not even me logic. Spencer, what the fuck?”

Okay, I just fell a little bit in love with your Ryan...

“I’d say I didn’t mean to eavesdrop, but it was kind of hard not to. Plus I totally did.”

...And there's me falling for your Jon too :D

“Brendon’s a good boy,” she told him, “And I saw enough of his brave little toaster face when you were growing up. I don’t want to ever see it again. Okay?”Oh, that's a heartbreaker, right ( ... )

torakowalski September 13 2008, 15:54:09 UTC

Oh thank you so much, what a lovely comment! I'm really glad the characterisations worked for you, and that you liked Ryan and Jon - they kept trying to steal the fic so I had to be firm and limit their scenes.

siubhlach September 13 2008, 23:41:35 UTC

Limited and yet still awesome. Obviously you just win at the pron :D