Comments | torakiss: [FIC] Of Strawberries and Cream

torakiss

[FIC] Of Strawberries and Cream

Jan 27, 2013 02:07

∞ Of Strawberries and Cream
→ EXO: Kris/Suho; Smut, Fluff, NC-17; 3650 words
! beta: blake_maclaren
!! unnecessary sequel to Escalator
!!! for Ayesha ♥

( “You've got cream on your lips,” Yifan answers his question in a whisper, using a husky voice that Junmyeon deems unnecessary. )

fic: one-shot, fic: krisuho, fandom: exo

Comments 20

read0write January 28 2013, 05:43:14 UTC

oh goodness
that was just...i enjoyed that ^^

torakiss January 28 2013, 16:22:57 UTC

omg! this is such an honor! ;u; thank you so much for reading and commenting! to be honest, i'm quite anxious about this piece because this is my very first smut fic. I'm really glad to hear that you enjoyed this ;;u;;

*sobs in a corner*

kimpoi03 January 29 2013, 10:53:52 UTC

SCREAMS!!!!!!!!!!!1
istg i find it really hard to believe that this is your first ever smut fic
good job kichie i am sweating in an airconditioned room.

Sweeter than the cream, tastier than the strawberries.

♡ ヽ(愛´∀｀愛)ノ

torakiss February 2 2013, 12:43:18 UTC

i lrhub youuuuuu ♡ thank you so much for reading this, kimkim ;;;u;;; this means a lot.

xkeirafanx February 24 2013, 16:14:28 UTC

Never seeing strawberry cake the same ever again. Oh, but I liked it and really, who doesn't want Kris and Suho covered in sticky, sweet, creamy stuff.

torakiss February 25 2013, 03:33:33 UTC

hi keira-sshi!! and omg your userpic!!!! ♥3♥

i have this unhealthy obsession over strawberries (and cream) and the birthday girl gave me a kitchen counter prompt so i guess it'd be fitting to feature a strawberry cake XD and this happened to be my first smut fic also. and i don't think i'd be able to write smut again orz

i wasn't expecting you'd read this ; ; you just made me so happy ; ; 하트♥

xkeirafanx February 25 2013, 18:04:55 UTC

Bias is bias, I still have a Zhang Liyin one too...

Oh, I love strawberry and cream too (in fact vanilla cream and strawberries are waiting for me in the fridge right now) so a fanfic with it is never a no, right? xD I feel awkward about smut writing too, I give it my try once in a blue moon, but it's nothing so spectacular. Some people just can write it, some shouldn't and some try. I liked the smut though, I told you.

Kich~ I still ship Kris/Suho, did you forget? xD

torakiss February 26 2013, 08:14:38 UTC

sobs i think i DID forget ; ; i'm sorry ; ; but now that you've mentioned it, the memories are coming back to me slowly ; u ; these two leaders are just so cute together ;n; it's a bit difficult for me to imagine them (at this point in time, that is) to be.... naughty or mean without them being cute in the end ; u ;

thank you so, so much for reading and leaving a comment, keira-sshi ♥ c(=^w^= c) *gives you more slices of strawberry cakes*

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