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Mar 23, 2010 21:41

just a little, tiny ficlet that's pretty much straight sugar. honest to goodness. i just really, really, really like reid and lila together. i think they're adorable to the nth degree. seriously, so cute.

never never ever never
reid/lila, nc-17, 1644 words

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pairing: reid/lila, tv: criminal minds

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emmakitty March 24 2010, 08:53:52 UTC
Wow, that was really beautifully written. I love how you managed to maintain your own unique style and voice while still keeping Lila and Spencer in character. I look forward to reading more of your work!

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ferrassie March 24 2010, 18:22:28 UTC
thank you very much! i think i'm constantly at war with style vs. character -- so, success!

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poeticpathetic March 24 2010, 23:17:09 UTC
This is amazing. You're exactly the sort of person I want to brainstorm Reid-fic with. I think you could make an amazing OC for him, too, you write so well and so honestly and so true-to-character and form. Brilliant.

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ferrassie March 25 2010, 00:58:20 UTC
thank you! after mainlining the show for such an extended period of time, i think reid's voice is actually stuck in my head. freaks me out a bit. but, seriously, i'm glad you that you enjoyed it.

(i'd definitely be interested in brainstorming! feel free to pm me wtih some ideas or whatnot and we can go from there.)

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poeticpathetic March 25 2010, 01:10:57 UTC
Your Reid's voice is perfect, just the way I imagine him. I read your other Morgan/Reid fic as well -- I'm not usually a M/M slasher, but that fic was so well-written that I really bought it.

And I sent you a PM!

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topnote March 25 2010, 01:41:49 UTC
you are pretty much too kind. (seriously, i'm running out of responses that don't sound stupid!)

and i will get on reading that!

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_nextboldmove_ April 1 2010, 00:16:36 UTC
At first I thought this style was going to get old and annoying, but you convey the emotions of each of them so well. I love all the unspoken uneasiness between them, that invisible barrier that I think was punctuated by the style. Thanks for sharing!

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ferrassie April 1 2010, 01:55:45 UTC
i definitely understand how this style can get annoying (i might be a little too aware of it, actually), but i'm glad you enjoyed it. i liked exploring their visible awkwardness a lot.

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Loved it drjw April 9 2010, 21:05:52 UTC
I love this stories between Reid and Lila. I hope you write more in the future.

Your style is unique. It is almost like poetry written in prose form. Beautifully written.

Very high marks from me.

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ferrassie April 10 2010, 00:34:04 UTC
thank you! i love experimenting with style and prose-poetry and generally getting to be weird.

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