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[topnote]

i have catastrophically bad timing, i do. need an arsenal lift? write angsty retirement fic! well, that's what this is. some sidenotes: bouchra does play a large part in how the story functions (and, despite the r rating, there is no explicit heterosexual content within the fic); there are passing mentions of the vp children and thomas's girlfriend

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[ferrassie]

kjdhfa, i don't even know how to properly respond to this comment. thank you so much, really (really, really). ♥

[baronessbadger]

Oh, this made my chest ache.

I really, really like this. I like your style of writing.

Memming.

[ferrassie]

thank you (and for the mem, too)! i'm glad you enjoyed it.

[darkensunrise]

I've never read this pairing before but I loved this. I love the way you write.

[ferrassie]

thank you very much for reading, then! i appreciate it a lot. :)

[cagedlight]

Wow, oh wow. This is so wonderful. I just love the way you write, it's so sparse but yet it's filled with so much detail and emotion. And as much as I loved the way you wrote Van Persie, Jack and Thomas I especially loved Bouchra, you wrote her with such grace and thought.

[ferrassie]

again, i just don't even know what to say. i genuinely respect bouchra and i was hoping that would really come through in her character. thank you so, so much for the feedback.

[nahco3]

I loved this so much. your writing is so sparse and beautiful - you manage to convey so much emotion with so much words. this just made my heart ache. lovely.

[ferrassie]

this entire comment is too lovely, i just. thank you very much.