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misswinterhill July 8 2009, 07:36:48 UTC
Argh, I've been a bad beta, not looking at the finished version yet! I'm sorry! This is such an original concept, it deserves love.

I like the change of tense, and I definitely like the hints of the letter that you're giving us. I also think that the glass smashing reads very well, awesome stuff. Loving italics on the last line, too! :)

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topgeargirl2 July 8 2009, 08:00:11 UTC
Thank you so much.

Thanks again for the beta.

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