Comments | topgeargirl2: Will I regret it in the morning? (Torchwood, Jack/Ianto NC-17)

topgeargirl2

Will I regret it in the morning? (Torchwood, Jack/Ianto NC-17)

Jun 15, 2009 15:46

porn, nc-17, jack/ianto, ficlet, drunk!sex, slash, torchwood

Comments 19

nasakiiofsand June 15 2009, 12:27:29 UTC

Loved it!!! I like your style, it's cute yet something deeper!

I don't know if you had this beta'd or not but this one line stuck out to me
"He keeps sucking, getting more quicker as Ianto yells." I think you need the more in there, but I dunno. It's still a wonderful story to read first thing in the morning. =]

~Nasakii

nasakiiofsand June 15 2009, 12:28:55 UTC

Wah! I meant don't need the more in there. Stupid brain hasn't had coffee yet >.

topgeargirl2 June 15 2009, 12:38:02 UTC

Thanks

I don't really have a beta but I don't want one.

nasakiiofsand June 15 2009, 13:12:15 UTC

Okay thats cool!

Still love the story

missthingsplace June 15 2009, 12:36:50 UTC

Love it!

topgeargirl2 June 15 2009, 12:38:51 UTC

Thanks

luvinthe88and20 June 15 2009, 13:10:20 UTC

Great job.

topgeargirl2 June 16 2009, 00:16:47 UTC

Thanks

owensheart June 15 2009, 13:33:12 UTC

Yumy, just hot enough. Loved it

topgeargirl2 June 16 2009, 00:16:15 UTC

thanks

thrace_adams June 15 2009, 20:23:15 UTC

Oh I like this a lot...very nice and hot!

topgeargirl2 June 16 2009, 00:14:29 UTC

Thanks