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hab318princess December 30 2008, 10:35:06 UTC
Very nice, liked that a lot!

feeling sorry for the bride...

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topgeargirl2 December 30 2008, 10:38:06 UTC
Well he did love her as well. it's just he loved Jack first.

I enjoyed writing this story.

Thanks.

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adafrog December 30 2008, 14:04:02 UTC
Lovely, thanks.

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topgeargirl2 December 30 2008, 23:17:23 UTC
Thanks

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cookiesofkarma December 30 2008, 14:15:39 UTC
Aww, that's beautiful. I like it very much indeed ^^.

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topgeargirl2 December 30 2008, 23:16:51 UTC
Thanks.

I enjoyed writing it

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fajrdrako December 31 2008, 01:40:36 UTC
Nice ending. I liked it that you named him "James".

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topgeargirl2 December 31 2008, 01:48:48 UTC
Thanks

it's only just now that the name 'James Harper' as entered my head. Even at the time it didn't hit me.

I've used the name James Worthington before for a character in another story which I never finished.

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fajrdrako December 31 2008, 01:51:34 UTC
it's only just now that the name 'James Harper' as entered my head.

Maybe it was subconscious? I thought of it as soon as I saw James Worthington's name, and thought, "Jack must have taken the name because of his former lover." I like that idea.

In your other story, did you slash James Worthington with Jack there, too?

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topgeargirl2 December 31 2008, 01:53:54 UTC
no actually a sherlock Holmes story for Fan fiction.net. I was starting to hate it so I stopped because I realised that Torchwood was better to write and I was having more fun.

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tintop_lizzy December 31 2008, 04:10:23 UTC
*sniffle*

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topgeargirl2 December 31 2008, 04:14:10 UTC
Thanks

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